Heartbeat

Description

You're only alive as long as you love, stop and your heart stops.
Seungri is forgetting how to love, can he be saved?

 


xo♡ox

Seungri was not innocent. His body had touched and been touched. His person had betrayed and been betrayed.

Seungri was pure. He had come to realise his mistakes and regretted them deeply. He had let go and become like a blank page.

Jiyong admired Seungri for this. 

Jiyong fell in love with Seungri. 

Then he saw something that worried him to death.

Foreword

Props to anyone who can guess what song I used for this! There's a very unsubtle hint ;)

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sadiraelau
#1
Chapter 1: Omg!! This is amazing!! All words and sentences are sweet! Not bitter at all ^^
Ayaaahime #2
Chapter 1: This is ING awesome( sorry for cursing but yeah I needed to let it out)

omg! JUST OMG.
Feels all over the place. Like DAMN!

so so so many lines that hit home. Like you hit my heart with every WORD.!


I actually came to a point in my life where two things are proven. That people pretends for convenience and love is for fools who is dellusional.

nyongtory saved me from that pit of depression. Reading fics and seeing the world differently with its wisdom.

I'm actually very happy I got to read this fic!
You know, only few fics affect my POV in life in reality; but this one hit home.

Thank you for writing this with nyongtory and thank you for being an newly found inspiration! ;)))
FIGHTING!
diamante25 #3
I can feel your heartbeat by: Enrique Inglesias? Please continue this.
jithesandpaper #4
Chapter 1: JAJSHSJKSJSVSJSLLA
JSJSSKSKSKSJHDDHDK
SJSJHSSSLWLWLSLKDKD
mayo_25 #5
Chapter 1: 'His Heaven was here' . the best line eveeer ugh love it too much <3
jejuchan
#6
I totally love this <3 pure love <3
Spyce10
#7
Chapter 1: Well written. What's the song? Let me know... Is seungri gonna die? Please don't make him die. Update soon
tarepandasan #8
Chapter 1: That was beautiful!!! Love it!
showmeyour-heart
#9
Chapter 1: This is so sweeeet.

Though I would seriously kick and slap some biitches if they leave me when i need them most then come back when I'm all better.

Well off to sleep. Sorry for the short comment, I need to sleep or else I'll be twice as exhausted tomorrow. ; ;
rh3apanda
#10
Chapter 1: Qrdhtdhgasfmj.jligjf.....

Omg!!!!! I love it......

Write moreeeeeeeee... Please....^^