The Meeting

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I'm a new writter here, still don't know how to make a good story.
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Foreword

 

It was a bad day in the beginning of January. The rain fell so hard this day just not like usual, if it usually has 3 millimeters, today the rain can counted as 300 millimeters. In the middle of that condition and in front of a big famous school stood a beautiful girl, she has a very long hair and that beautiful hair mostly wet. Even water fall from her uniform. That girl named Naeun. She was waiting for her boyfriend in that bad weather. Her boyfriend just promised her would pick her up from school. But until this time, her boyfriend didn’t come already.

            Naeun looked at her black watch at her left wrist again. It was the thousand times she looked at her watch. Her lips was dry although the environment was very wet. She tried to take her phone in her bag, but when she got it, it wasn’t on again.

“Oh my… How can this kind of thing happened?”, her face turned blank. She put her phone back to her bag. She stood with her low shoulder without any hopes again. There weren’t any person there, school had ended about three hours ago. And it was turning late now.

            “Hey..” a boy came suddenly to her with wet uniform. He wagged his hair and his breath was very fast because he just ran to the gate where Naeun stand. He smiled to her with very shy face.

            “Oh.. Hey..” Naeun answered with an awkward voice because she didn’t know the boy anyway. She looked deep on his face. She thought that she ever met him before, but who was he?

            “It’s a very bad day, right?”, that boy wagged his hair again and looked at Naeun with little laugh.

            “Yes. And it was unlucky for me,” Naeun raised her face to look at the boy with a pity face.

            “Why? Ahahaha… What happen to your face?”, he laughed and suddenly a thunder came to them.

            “OMG, please don’t laugh!”, Naeun put her index finger in front of her lips.

            “So, Miss, why you still stood here? Don’t you go home?”

“I want so. But you know, it’s the hard rain and I can’t go home because of this. The worst is I haven’t any one to pick me up. Hemm… this is too late now,” Naeun stomp her feet to the ground and once again bit her lips.

            “I can drive you to your home if you want.” said the boy easily.

            Naeun looked at him with amazed glare. Naeun wasn’t wrong about him. She felt she ever knew him, that’s because of his face. He looked like someone she knew, he had big brown eyes, sharp nose, and a cute way to speak.

            “Ah, my name is Gongchan,” he said his name easily to a girl who he just met.

            “Gongchan? I think I ever heard that name,” Naeun got a clue again. Make her trust of ever seen him got higher.

            “Haha… Of course, you had to. Am I that famous in this school? So, who are you?”

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chaniefans #1
Im sorry for late update
I still busy with ma school task and about ma final exam
Mianhae~
-reikotoots
#2
Chapter 3: Ermahgerd. Still waiting..
-reikotoots
#3
Chapter 2: Omg, just meet in one place.
ploykz-sunny #4
update soon asap