Why You?

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DaeJae with a twist... TS put together couples, yet Daehyun and Youngjae hate each other. Will the pairing bring them together, or only tear them farther apart? 

Foreword

Hello everyone!  I've had this idea for a while and decided to expand on it..... I always wondered if companies "arranged" couples to be shipped, and if so what would happen if the couple didn't get along.  Add on the fact that I'm really one who's more for angst and drama then fluff and romance, finding the dark side of one of the most genuine couples seemed... well... quite doable! 

Please comment! I know that seems weird, but comments actually mean a lot to me. I'm a new writer and sometimes worry over little things so getting honest feedback is extremely inspiring! 

Anyway comment and subscribe please!

- Jocelyn xx 

 

WARNING: 

- Swearing

- Possible depression and self harm 

- Bullying... if it bothers you, don't hate and don't read

- I'm not sure what else yet :)

Author's Thoughts
Jocelynisclassic
damn I just put this on a pages file and it's a total of 31,107 words... thats so much!
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LoozBabyz #1
Chapter 22: It's good story..
But I don't understand tbe last part..
Who he mentioned about??
In the patient room?
Nakamitsu #2
Chapter 22: :) Truly enjoyed reading ^^ I teared up here and there :) Read it all in one go. :)
Nakamitsu #3
Chapter 10: LOL She blew up. I was waiting for that part :D
Song_Yeon_Hee #4
Chapter 10: Awe~ , Junhong protecting his noona but damn everyone calm down
Jpd0824 #5
Chapter 23: whatever you decide to do.. I'll still be a reader =] it's just too good =]
piko_chik #6
Chapter 23: IM FINE WITH WHATEVER YOU WANT TO DO!!!! I'm the type that lets the author surprise me because everybody thinks differently!!!!
pav230 #7
Chapter 23: I loved it......poor daejae baby...in pain.....
stardrop #8
Chapter 23: Let me tell you something. Wriite for yourself, because it makes you happy. Develop the stories the way you want them to go and try to ignore all those crybabies. You will never be able to satisfy everybody anyway.
I think, that the moment you give up writing for yourself you will lose the fun in writing.

YOU are the author and its YOUR piece of art so the readers should appreciate the way you wrote it.
I mean, it's not like you buy a book and then go an complain at the authors because you didn't like the ending, do you?
LKyellow #9
Chapter 23: To be honest I don't think an alternate ending is necessary. Yes it was sad but it was also beautiful and an excellent to the story. Of course, I would definitely still read the alternate ending if you posted it, so if you feel like writing it by all means go ahead. :)
15wonderboys #10
Chapter 22: whhhhhhyYYYY WHY DOES IT HAVE TO END LIKE THAT!!!! ((cries)) *pretends that chapter 20, 21 dont exist* everything's perfect alr omg whyy
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