When the First Snow Fell

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“Saranghaeyo, oppa.” Her voice was barely a whisper, her breathing ragged.

Those were the first words that left her lips in thirteen years.

He unfolded her crumpled note, choking back tears.

 

And that was when the first snow fell.

Foreword

To all of you who have bothered to spare this story some time,

 

I've written this chaptered fic for Outside the Box Writing Contest. The theme is Winter, as simply represented by my title.

 

I shall dedicate this story to all of you out there. Bittersweet. The taste of life. That's how I've always known it, and maybe you do too. So here's to a bittersweet journey - of joys and sorrows, of smiles and tears, of love and regrets.

 

I'd also like to especially thank blissful for the really beautiful poster. Really, thank you so much :)

 

And to all MyungZy shippers, enjoy <3

 

- falliblefantasy

 

Review credits to: kittyxluvlee at ◤「 t๏t๏г๏ гєשเєฬ รђ๏ק 」◥ for the review 

   jadefix at C H E R I I ° Tomatoes Graphics & Review for the review

 cherrylisa at Awkward Tokki ✦ Reviews Shop for the review

 

 

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falliblefantasy
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user555 #1
Chapter 10: Amazing story, thanks
my_mich05 #2
Chapter 10: this is a sad story but nevertheless a good one and an emotional too..
macchiato- #3
I am so thankful that I found your story in between the recommendation lists that I scrolled through.

The title really pulled me in - "When the First Snow Fell." It's so poetic and seemed to have a lot of hidden meanings that are related to the plot. Beautiful.

The story, it's amazing. You kept it simple yet meaningful, and by the end, you made us readers feeling the pain of both Suzy and Myungsoo. I like how things were related to each other and was not stated as obvious as other writers tend to. And I especially love the ending, for I had thought that the two of them would end up being reunited after so long they got separated. The twist at the end was simply amazing.

I am not a MyungZy shipper, almost at all. Not even a Miss A nor Infinite stan - but for a beautifully written story like yours, how would biases take matter? Thank you for writing this, I'll make sure to check your other stories :-)
Suzyelfs #4
Chapter 10: Dis is sad story.i dun knw y i cried like hell.like suzy really lost to me..haish..great piece of work author.love it sooo much.
watermelon #5
I browsed through your stories and this title of yours caught my eyes. Honestly speaking, I wanted to sleep but your story kept me up all the way until I finished it. This is simply sweet. Your description is good but not overwhelming. (: I like how the plot is not complicated but has a meaning behind every event. How Suzy's mother and Sungjong knew and had long forgiven Myungsoo for his father, how Suzy remembered him and every bit of it. I truly enjoyed reading this story, including your author's note. ^^
It's saddening and unfortunate for Suzy to get into an accident but I'm fine with it. I have always been an angst reader who appreciate author's cruelty.(; *shrugs*
I would admit that I was looking forward to Suzy joining the others in the crowd and to see Myungsoo and Sungjong's surprised faces but I guess, fate always have its ways at things. Not everything turn out to be what you want them to be, I understand. Thank you for reminding us. <3
Have an awesome day! :D
ps. I just thought I've to comment on this one when I am on comp so here I am with my poorly expressed comment. :$
vanniaaa #6
such a beautiful story! ;_; it's short yet so memorable (Y)
myoungjunim #7
Chapter 10: omg;___; this is one of the fanfic that i have read so nice... but the ending. i like the way you describe the details it is really nice ♡
blissful #8
Chapter 10: oh gosh ;_; i finally got some time to finish reading this story, but ahhhh i am in tears now *sniffs*
i think the ending suited the tone of the story though, and it is sweet to see Myungsoo still remembering Suzy <3
Thank you for the great read! ^_^
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