Chapter 1: Hi, i just read this story...
I have to say, i like the idea of this story so much, it's not often to read Key being so harsh on Taemin, but i think it would be much better if you continue a little bit just to show the ending of TaeKey's relationship whether they made up and be friends again or not, coz the whole point of this story is about Key getting mad at Taemin, right? So i kinda expect to see the outcome of their fight. Maybe let Key see Taemin in tears after his harsh treatment and feeling the guilt or anything, hehe...
That's just a suggestion tho coz when i read the ending, somehow i don't feel like it's actually ending already, it's like something's missing.
But i have to say, i love 2MIN moment there, how Minho helped Taemin calming him down. Maybe he can help Taemin making up with Key, hehe...
Chapter 1: Its just a small thing, but Minho managed it so well. He's there for Taebaby TT
And Key is so.. ____y -_-
But its GREAT author-nim, love your idea and writing!
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