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Hi everyone!

i'm new here to asian fanfics

well duhh

but i joined because there's alot of writers who have really inspired me

and because i wanted to comment on their stuff as well  ^ ^

i love reading and i love kpop

and fore me

kpop + reading = ASIANFANFICS!

So if you can please give my first story a read,it's jsut a quick little thing...

criticsm is needed

and i greatly appreciated!!!!!!!!!

oh yeah!

thse story is about Baek Hyun, as your boyfriend then you see Kris, who you like, and then a whole rollercoaster comes after that!

Foreword

 

"So this is your new dorm?" I smiled at my Baek Hyun Oppa as we strolled through the dorm of his new school.

I blushed slightly catching a glimpse of the pair of those beautiful brown eyes that stared affectionately back at me as the words left my mouth.

 

"Yeah, it is baby," he smiled nudging my shoulder gently pulling me into his warmth.

 

I grinned this gorgeous human being was all mine.

 

But…

 

He was the biggest player you and most well known kingka wherever he set foot in a school. But as I sad before…

 

He was all mine.

 

Finally we reached dorm 37 and entered. The room was expensively put together with a modern style and really proved the name of the school.

 

(Kinda like to the beautful you)

 

"Wow it's really cool," I smiled at him as we neared the bed.

 

Gently I felt an arm slide possessively around my waist pulling me with tight provocative squeeze. I looked up eagerly at Baek Hyun even as he grinned at me with mischievous up-to-no-good look.

 

"Byunnie, you haven't spent 30 seconds in the room," I gasped feeling his hands needily massaging my small waist begging for a kiss.

 

"So," he grinned narrowing those dark cynical eyes at me.

 

With no more words to be said, my lips were already his.  Hungrily he dislodged his jaw back and forth, his wet lips pressing against mine. Eagerly his tongue teased into my mouth rooting itself to the cavern of my mouth.

 

I grinned contentedly at the sweet moist taste that I had grown to love. I could feel my body being lowered and soon my back had made contact with the soft cold sheets of his bed.

 

 I wrapped my arms around his neck following the gentle alluring motion of his hands caressing my legs.

 

My body felt as if it had plummeted through the bed upon hearing the door crack open. Baek Hyun stopped to as we both looked up to see who had entered during our well…

 

You know, kiss.

 

My heart shuddered unexplainably followed by cold shivers that had found their way along my spine. I hated myself for it, but who was this person?

 

Out of the door walked a very tall sleek absolutely gorgeous individual. I swooned at his long slender torso and strong build, and such a handsome arrangement of graceful yet harsh features on his face with a thick mop of silky Gold colored hair, where a few strands feathered along his forehead.

 

My eyes traveled further down as I took in the leather jacket, a low white v-neck and black denim on those -on-legs.

 

He was hot.

 

My gaze fell on Baek Hyun almost forgetting that he was there, as he continued to look at the strange individual.

 

The person seemed unaffected by the sight of us, simply glancing at me his focus mainly on Baek Hyun.

 

"Hyung?" Baek Hyun’s voice suddenly broke the silence.

 

He knew him?

 

A white heart-fluttering smirk broke from the corners of this gorgeous individual as they both began to identify each other.

 

That was enough to make me blush after already feeling myself fall for him.

 

But my boyfriend was right here, this guy was just hot. That's all.

 

"Baek Hyun long time no see," the soft gentle baritone escaped his throat as he greeted Baek Hyun who had already gotten up and headed to his direction.

 

They greeted each other with a friendly bromantic hug with huge grins, as I tried to sit up from the bed.

 

"Ummm Oppa?" I asked pathetically feeling slightly forgotten.

 

"Ohh, baby sorry!" Baek Hyun grinned embarrassingly scratching his head. The person glanced at me with an annoyed stare which instantly made me irritated and develop an instant dislike.

 

"This is Wu Fan Kris an old friend," he smiled at him.

 

So Wu Fan Kris. Sounds annoying.

 

"Oh, Hyung this is my girl friend ________ah," he smiled helping me off the bed.

 

He smiled graciously at me, almost forcing it, the laugh lines of his face making him way more handsome, even of it were possible.

 

He put out a hand, "Nice to meet you, ________ah," he said his tone laxed and carefree.

 

"Nice to meet you, uhhhh Kris oppa," I smiled pleasantly accepting his hand gesture annoyed by the tone of his voice.  Nervously I looked away as I tried in vain to break the contact of those mesmerizing eyes.

 

I glanced back at him just in time to see a smile fade away from his face.

 

"So we’re room-mates?" Baek Hyun began speaking to him again.

 

"Small world right?" he responded playing with the beads along his bracelet.

 

Cute but he was still a .

 

 "So does that mean we'll being seeing a lot of each other?" I smiled implying how much I dreaded it, clearly sending the message to this Wu Fan person.

 

He narrowed his eyes telling me I-Don't-like-you either. With a smirk.

 

"I guess so."

 

Off to a great start.

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taemin1
#1
he walked in on them kissing.WOW