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The Scream

In the early afternoon, under a grey sky…

Yixing and his parents were on their way to an art gallery…

“Did you remember everything, Yixing?”

“Oh! Do you have your handkerchief? You know, the one you got for your birthday?”

“Keep it safe in your pocket, okay? Don’t lose it!”

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natsumi4ever #1
Chapter 13: You know, kris is kinda terrible at this game XD
flytothesKAI #2
Chapter 30: Wow I'm so scared to go to sleep now. Idk who is guartena but I'm sure his/her arts must be creepy as . Good story definitely worth upvote :))
BabybeMine #3
No wonder i feel like a dejavu, another bro mmh? Kkk upvoted this cz I really loved it!
chanyeoldesu #4
HI I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS
Arashika #5
Chapter 30: Wow, this was great! I really enjoyed reading it :D you have a way with words that really allows the readers to experience the world that they're trapped in.

That being said, as someone who has played Ib and watched playthroughs of it, I kind of hoped that you would have done something different with the story. With the way you've written it and the dialogue and the puzzles- almost all of it is directly from the game. And along with that comes this odd idea that yixing is very child-like in this story, somehow I can't help but see him as a child in Ib's role, even though he's supposed to be a university student, and this comes from the things he says, the actions that he takes, while stuck in this world.

I would have liked to see a different story, a reimagining of Guertena's world, with different characters and different horrors to deal with. It felt a little to me like I would have been able to experience this just by playing the game myself and calling the characters different things in my head.

It was a fun read regardless, and your writing is great :D there are a lot of great games that lend themselves to fanfic easily, and I enjoyed reading this adaptation of it. Well done!

Great job, keep writing~
-RKP_Yoshi #6
I only read the author note just now, but I have been reading this over and over again since 2013. When I saw he playthrough for Ib, after seeing the word Guertena, I just thought 'no. freaking. way'.

I love how you make your own twist on this though. I love this fanfic.
xingnini #7
oh my god lol this was really good i didnt expect it from tao
araminori #8
Chapter 30: i love this story ><
Xathina #9
Chapter 30: I love this story! I've played Ib before and this is practically the same. Great job. (=^x^=)
KrispyLaysKray #10
Chapter 30: Ohmigosh. The horror. The terror. Everything was horrible but terribly exciting. I am never one for horror fictions but this! This story was brilliant. I'm afraid I couldn't stop reading at all. Too engrossed, I was. And scared that I might get a nightmare if I did not finish it by tonight.
Aww... Tao is just a painting. I'm somewhat sad about that... Well, it was kind of fishy that they met Tao a lot later.
Anyway, thank you for the lovely story. It was an exciting journey.
XOXO and Happy New Year!
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