Your Smile

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No matter how hard life would be

I hope she would always find a reason to smile

And later when I have left

I pray that she would still wear that smile I left her with

Because her smile is my happiness

No matter who would be the one she gives it to

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Let him be the reason behind her smile

And her smile can be the reason behind mine

 

 

 

 

Foreword

 

This story is my submitted entry for Vanilla448 Writing Contest:

 

Soul Connection -- a Writing Competition

 

The prompt I use is Dialogue7:

 

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"Promise me, you'll laugh with him twice as much like you did to me, love him twice as much like you love me and smile to him twice more."

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Enjoy! ^^

-hyo_jinki-

 

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LavenderAlisa19 #1
Chapter 4: Aww, I really hope that Nara could move on :'(

The plot was kinda predictable though lol but it's okay :) Your writing is decent enough so that makes up for it ;)
pinkbunnywithmask #2
Chapter 4: this is the best romance-sad fanfic evaaaaaar!!!! i crieeeed a lot. gosh, im such a baby. author-nim, this is daebakkk! seriously! *still cry a river*
hippo_guk #3
Chapter 4: oh my goshh it wasss sooo sad I cryed sooo muchhh, but yiur story was amazing!
Black_x_Rabbit #4
Chapter 4: TT^TT omg i almost cried!!!!
Park_HyeSun #5
Chapter 4: Somehow, at the start of Chapter 2, I was already assuming that Nara will not end up with Yongguk. More likely that she'd end up wih Daehyun, when I was considering your 'romance' tag.

This story is pretty decent. (: Minor grammar and word mix-ups, but other than that, your writing has enough substance to deliver a believable and touching story. Good job.
ceci_major #6
Chapter 2: can't wait for more chapters ^^
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