timeless torment

Description

Donghae was missing ever since the last concert he attended with SJ. his disapperance stirred contorversy, but it died down as soon as time passed. 2 years flew past, they still didn't find Donghae. eunhyuk is truly desparate to find his best friend. but, what was the reason to hide? so, what concluded the neverending search?

Foreword

^^ hi guys~! it my first time posting a fanfic so publicly~ XD hope u'll all comment and critize at the same time, so i can improve the bits that i needed to emphasize on~ thanks~ last but not least, enjoy~!! ^^

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ReadRealize #1 Sep 20, 2022 12:30:54

Just saw before i sleep this will def bunge read tomorrow

Forest_pixi #2 Jul 5, 2013 22:59:21

Chapter 12: this story is more questions than answers...i get that u were going for mystery and suspense but...
it's severely lacking and incomplete...sorry to say
the plot is mangled...there is no development between happenings...it just feels really random

eunhyuk seemed to be the only one suffering...what about the other members?

i would re-do this fic...just saying

niajae0411 #3 May 30, 2013 06:33:34

Chapter 12: erkk?? I have no idea what story is this haahhahahah.. Kinda lost

mewlexi #4 Apr 11, 2012 11:03:55

Huh?? I thought Donghae was gonna get married to Jaejoong? Why did he go? Why did he come back? What's going on?

superelf0809 #5 Mar 30, 2012 22:04:47

5016 views~ TT^TT thank u thank u >__< its such an amazing number ;__;thank u to all the readers~ plz comment or subscibe on my other fanfic~

idkwhatisgoingon #6 Mar 2, 2012 10:35:44

i kept reading comments saying they couldn't understand it! but, i think it was easy to understand :D
i mean, it was mysteriously well written that added a nice touch to the story line :D i loved it <3

CozURhere #7 Feb 15, 2012 03:56:43

?????????
all eunhyuk pov???
there still many questions mark there...
why donghae left?
getting married after being tormented???
kyuhyun???he just left like that??
i don't get it...sorry...

x3Maple #8 Aug 13, 2011 05:39:04

Uhm ok. I'm a bit confuse. I wish you can explain a bit further, like what happened to donghae's husband? Why did donghae leave?

SouthWest #9 Jun 11, 2011 21:11:13

Awww, I'm glad everything turned out okay. Everything in this story happened really quickly, so it was a little hard to keep up. But the chapters were written well. Overall, I like it. =) Thank you for posting and letting us read!