Spies, they’re everywhere. They blend in and nobody knows. Protecting the world from disaster and keeping secrets that aren’t meant to be known by anyone.  Their black gazes could pierce someone’s souls. Their body full of scars from each battle that raged on secretly between world powers.

Six men are to be protected. No one can deny them with their well known relatives, education, background, and money.  They’re unable to grasp the fact that people live in poverty.

The clash of the social classes and aliases. 

 Author: EunhaeLove

 Story: A Masquerade of Aliases 

 Genre: Action/ Suspence

 Features: Lee Donghae, Lee Taemin, Jung Yunho, Kangin, Kim Heechul ,OC's

Review:

Description: Short and simple, definitely leaves a lot to the mind. Does a good job with attracting the reader, makes you want to read more.

5/5

Grammer: Not bad there were few mistakes, but none that intturupted the flow of the story. They were minor things like use of tense's and awkward sentences.

"Nothing looked out of place but something was very wrong. " A comma is needed after place.

"Everything seemed in place. " Awkward sentence, doesn't need to be there but can stay.

Again I saw another "but" thats wasn't following a comma. I'm not going to point them all out, but be carefull with those.

"The voice was soft and cool like the feel of water flowing down from a creek. " A really nice simile, it helped imagine her voice.

" A paused and the emotionless..." Should be a pause. Verbs need to match the tense of the situation, present, past ect.

"...watched the person in front of her, lunged onto her." Should be lunge onto her.

Little things like those examples, I'm not going to pick out every one of them. Other then that everything is written nicely. The description is amazing, so is the dialog. 

4/5

Story Line/ Plot: Everything flows nicely. It's very easy to follow and extreamly interesting. The abundant description adds to th enjoyment of the story. It's nice to read a story when the author describes everything almost as if it were happening in front of you. I didn't want to look away while writing which is a very good sign. Keep on writing, I can't wait to see what's instore for the spies.

10/10

Total: 19/ 20

Rating: Blue

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