Forgive . . . Not

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I was a little fed up with sad Key because of Bling and SeKyung. I mean he`s the Diva, he won`t let one stupid dinosaur control his life like that.   heart

Foreword

Hello. That`s my first fanfic ever and I`m really nervous right now.

English is not my mother tongue so there might  be some mistakes.

I don`t hate critisism but please don`t be mean ^^^

It`s only an oneshot.

Hope you like it.

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PurpleRoseYeri #1
Chapter 2: Old scars indeed heal slowly, Minho might think that Key doesn't love him as much as he loved Jonghyun and maybe that is true but Key feels happy with Minho, doesn't use him for revenge and who knows, their relationship might grow even more with love and happiness.
PurpleRoseYeri #2
Chapter 1: Love Key being himself and not forgiving the hurtful thing that still haunts him. The ending was adorable, Key is happy with Minho.
SashaHRH #3
Chapter 1: Very well done! Love the lyrics throughout and I am totally a er for Minkey ;)
Ilonahaku #4
Chapter 2: OMG, it was so, so, so beautiful! *.* I would dare to say, it was almost perfect. :D

I love your insight into their relationship, Key´s feelings, love for Minho and Jjong, growing up in a relationship level. I simply love how you conveyed the story with mature and far-sighted/prudent feeling and message. <3

I especially love how you described how Minho fell in love with Key, how he was insecure about confessing and how their relationship turned out to be. I was really touched, how Minho saw important point of his bond with Key - that he was the one who held Key´s happiness, although he could be loved a little bit less, he was the important person for Key right now.

And I adore especially this part - "We started talking, or rather he was talking while I was listening. It was all poured out – his love, his emotions, his pain. I took it and kept it in me, turning it into care and concern. That was our relationship – simple as it is, but still important for the both of us."

You did really amazing job on this fanfic, it is really memorable for me. I would love to read another story of yours with similar feel. <3

Thank you very much for sharing this story! <3
Bekah931215 #5
Chapter 2: this was good :)
shawol410 #6
Chapter 2: nice. good story.
LiaUchiha #7
Awh! Minho is just too nice sweet. I didn't see the other chappie, but seriously, I'm awhing every 2 words. And Jonghyun is just being a jackass -_- I liked every but of the story^^
LiaUchiha #8
Even thought Jonghyun is my bias. He so totaly decerved it! Awh, Minho is so sweet to Key. And yeah I agree with you. In most stories Key is like all depressed over Jonghyun and Se Kyung. He IS the diva after all, he should just it and, yeah you get it :D Anyway, I LOVED this story, very very much! Keep on writing Hwiting!
ThiefWithoutAName #9
Jjong deserved this! He totaly deserved it! I liked the way Minho acted towards Key... I would fell for this, too! Wonderful oneshot! <3
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