The Moon Represents My Heart

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Im Yoona:

Popular but not aware of it. She’s a true beauty but living in simplicity.

She’s bright and intelligent.

Seohyun’s bestfriend/room mate.

 

Seo Joohyun aka. Seohyun:

Cheerful and wise student.  Smart and bookworm type.

She loves sweet potato so much!

Yoona’s BFF/room mate.

 

 

Xi Luhan

Student council’s president.  Appears to be cold as he is the President.

Sweet when it comes to his friends and his ex-girlfriend.

Extremely popular.

Kris’ best buddy.

 

 

Wu YiFan aka. Kris:

Band leader. Bad playboy is what others see in him but girls are still crazy about him.

Serious when he falls in love.

Playboy Kingka.

Luhan’s best buddy.

 

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iamstillunknown #1
Chapter 1: I hope that this is SeoKris, eventhough there are grammatical errors, I still understand it.. Great job author nim. I'm looking forward to your story..
seohyun10 #2
Chapter 1: I hope it's Seokris. :-)
Rini6189 #3
Chapter 1: I'm seeing YoonKris here. The moments that they share together are sweet. It's ironic that Kris is a playboy when he only has his heart set on one girl: Yoona. Luhan must be interested in Yoona from the sound of it. So, there appears to be LuYoonKris. Seohyun is like the typical high school girl gushing over her major crush. Because she doesn't stand out much, she doesn't get noticed by others.

The images that you're using for this chapter aren't showing. Even without those images, the readers can still picture the characters making those facial expressions and their actions from reading the descriptions that you include in the story.

The actual verb is "sitting," not "seating." "Seat" is a noun.

It's understandable since English isn't your first language.
Rini6189 #4
The title of this fic reminds me of the classic Chinese pop song sung by the late Teresa Teng. Like the moon's gravitational pull that affects the currents of the ocean's tides, the heart is an emotional well. Love makes the heart big and shine just like the moon that bathes the earth with its ethereal light in the darkness--giving us that hope.
OfSereneNights #5
Chapter 1: Aww. Seohyun likes Luhan who likes Yoona? And Kris, I just hope...he likes Seohyun! Hmmm, maybe Yoona is one of his ex-girlfriends? IDK.
originme0324 #6
Chapter 1: Was Luhan looking for Yoona? That's why he left straight away? If it is, I smell LuYoonKris xD
colormecandy #7
another LuYoon story! all the best <3
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