Be Still (And Know That I Am Here).

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It's hard to forget that underneath the starry galaxies, there lived a boy who loved Jongin as much as Jongin loved him. And when the universe's depraved ignorance remains, love lasts forever. 

Foreword

 

Inspired by The Fray's Be Still.

 

Prompt: b'shert - (n) destiny; referring to the seeking of a person who will complement you and whom you will complement perfectly ©

 

Length: 4850 words

 

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vicamhsg #1
Chapter 1: this is so beautiful just like all of your other fics ;_;
kikokomai-chan #2
Chapter 1: I really enjoyed this, it was nice, but I felt like it coul have flowed just a bit more smoothly. Something that I noticed was the repeating pronouns. I swear im not trying to be rude, I really liked it, but couldn't help not noticing how the repetition of the same words in the same sentence threw it off some. I had the exact problem to, and still forget to correct myself sometimes to.


I really hope you don't hate me now (worries)
But dont mind me, becauee I did thoroughly enjoy it.
Thank you for taking the time to write and publish this :)
loophigh #3
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dubudaebak #4
Chapter 1: oh God this is so beautifully written and heart breaking yet heart warming at the same time :"" I teared up at the part "how could I ever leave? I have you now"
omgggggg :")
ExoticMarshmallow #5
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lovexo_xo #6
Chapter 1: This was just beautiful and unique ^^
Totally loved every single part of it, including the poem :)
You are good with your words & details :))
Now i want a red umbrella ^^
saenggak #7
Chapter 1: Absolutely gorgeous, really :)
VIPExotic #8
Chapter 1: ''How could I ever leave?
I have you now.'' <3

Amazing fic..love your writing style, and love the happy ending^^
Fluffy Kaisoo feels everywhere;))
shixunist #9
Thanks for commenting! :)
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