Yuri ~

~ Dumping You Was The Biggest Mistake Of My Life ~

Listen to---  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oBB9nBnC_PI

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Did you ever wonder what it’s like to sink into a world of stillness?

A world of nothing.

Where the quietness you always longed for is there?

But it’s not peaceful.

It’s not calming.

It’s eerie….

You’re all alone with no beings for company.

Are you happy?

Are you truly happy?

Does it even matter anymore?

What about the numbing feeling that clogs your brain and you stop responding to things?

It starts up then moves down and no feelings are reached in the heart and no spark in the eye.

My question is this: Can you hear me?

Can you hear my desperate cries for you?

My lonely calling, my silent weeping?

How could I have continued breathing?

 I’m hanging on thin strings that are mocking me, that want to see me fall.

Can you see me?

Can you feel me?

I’ve slipped away far enough but can you reach me?

Will you fight for me?

So much for the happiness.

So much for the joy.

I’m hanging on in midair on nothing, holding on with fright as the regret took over my body:

Dumping you was the biggest mistake of my life.

 

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This is how the format of the story will actually be.

Like I said, it's a thought/song thing so I hope this doesn't turn you away~~~! I wanted to try something different than just a typical story format. Hope you will enjoy. I will try to update as much I can. And also, remember this is short haha. So don't beat me up^^

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Yuri = teal

Donghae = dark green

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foreveryoungwild #1
Beautiful well writen!:)
kpop4u #2
I REALLY LOVE THIS
blackpearl_yuri
#3
Yulhae.. ^_^
bianca
#4
Yulhae!!! this ff is really touching:" i love thiss
SINUJJ #5
AWWW!! uri Donghae!!! <3333. Babe! i love how u try writeing in diff styles! thank you! <3
SINUJJ #6
OMG!! GURL! DIS IS DRIVING ME NUTS!!! Y DA HECK DID DEY BREAK UP!!?? update faster! mann!! so i can c dem happy!? :3
nawachan
#7
Yulhae~!
SINUJJ #8
aww her pov! cumon! y cant dey just get bak together alreadyy!! <33 T____________________T <br />
update soon! babes!! i missed ur wrighting!!! <3
kiwibubblecat
#9
I am so loving Yulhae more now. :> I feel pity for them, they love each other so much! But why do they have to separate. :(
siiisoyuri #10
yeeaahh! i <3 it :D