Twisted: A Murder Game

Description

The true Halloween horror starts when you can no longer trust your closest friends. Let the games begin. 

Foreword

Article from The Korea Times
Date: 1 December 2012

The Seoul Metropolitan Police Force announced at a press conference yesterday that they will cease all investigations on the case dubbed 'The Halloween Murders' by the press and public.

The horrific discovery of four college students murdered at an abandoned mansion shook the nation one day after Halloween. According to the coroner, the four victims were murdered within 24 hours from the discovery of the bodies. The police has refused to disclose the cause of deaths, citing the lack of evidence to make any conclusions.

The victims were 22-year-old Choi Siwon and Lee Donghae and 21-year-old Choi Sooyoung and Kwon Yuri. The victims were believed to be goods friends attending the same college. Because they are from reputable families, there has been great interest in this case by the public and additional pressure on the police to bring their attackers to justice.

The announcement to cease all investigation was met with violent protests from the families of the victims. However, the police commissioner has admitted that the lack of potential suspects has hindered any further development in their investigation.

 

 

(A/N: This is a short story to be completed by 31 October 2012.

Warning: Some scenes may be disturbing and violent. Story contains some foul language.)

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dragonpimp #1
Chapter 8: Your story was fantastic!
I really didn't expect that Kyuhyun was the one that planned all of this--I suspected Siwon lol.
Good job Author-sshi!
_x13elievex_ #2
OMG. YOU ARE FREAKING AWESOME! I know I'm quite late at commenting and subscribing. In fact, very late, but after I saw the 'Whispers of the Undead' where I saw you saying that you mentioned that you came back with another Halloween story. So I checked the stories that you've written to find the last last year's Halloween story and ta-da! I found it! :D It was freaking nice. I was fully absorbed into this story! How the hell did you do it?! I mean its really damn freaking cool. You are a genius! Your English was superb, your plot was new and it just captured me into this horror story! Your ability to describe is what I think made this story most successful. It really grabbed my attention. It scared me. I felt disgusted, shock and terrified when I was reading this. This is totally the best story ever crafted! Really! OMG. I'll admit it. I have always been afraid of horror movies/shows. Just looking at the trailers would made me have goosebumps. But this was really perfect. I felt scared while reading this, but I just wanted to read the next word and the next word and the next word! This is just wow. I have no better description for this story but just wow. It was really a fantastic job done! I hope to expect another hair-standing and spine-tingling experience when reading 'Whispers of the Undead'! <33333333333333333333 :***
GooJiMin #3
Chapter 7: You scare me enough...i like your story....
magnificentoreox
#4
Chapter 8: i just read this and i must say oh my goodness! Total mind blown! No joke! I've never expected this, gosh! You did a great job! :)
lovidovi #5
Chapter 8: Whoa! Awesome!
I didn't even think the murderer was Kyuhyun.
Good job, author ^^
rapunsyoo
#6
Chapter 8: omg this is great! i didn't expect that Kyuhyun is the planner all of this e____e
rainingcho #7
Chapter 8: This is awesome :D I luv reading thriller/kidnapp/killing/action stories of sj/sugen (well specifically kyu, but sugen is still awesome) but I already knew it would be kyu coz he was the only one mentioned other than the 4 :) the plot is totally awesome. I love it and all other stories from u. Keep up the good work ^^
LittleMissJNJ
#8
Chapter 8: This is so awesome omg i never suspected Kyu o.0 well done author nim! ;)