If you were the Mermaid

Description

 

 

When  words aren’t enough

 

I’ll sing you a  love song

 

 

 

Since she had been little Yoona had dreamed of the big city Seoul.

Her sisters had told her many stories about the bright metropole and it’s wonders. When she finally is old enough to travel there herself she discovers even more than just the city life.

She meets the prince of her dreams...

 

Foreword

Annyeong~ MikiApple imnida *bows*

This is my entry for kpopbaby03's writing contest Once Upon A Time!

My story will be based on Andersen's The Little Mermaid (^_~)

Enjoy reading and I always appreciate feedback~

Kamsahamnida \(^o^)/

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Hellomej #1
Chapter 10: SEQUEL PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
Julettums #2
Chapter 10: ... Make a sequel NOW!
aetherius #3
Chapter 10: i almost started crying... the ending was a bit sudden but more endings the reader can think up right?
you did a really good job.. you should make another one.. i would definitely read it :D
poutqueen #4
Chapter 10: I love emphasizing LOVE, But i felt that the ending seemed a bit rushed. But overall it was an enthralling plot, I really wish there were more chapters! Hope you make a new one soon Chingu good luck Kamsa-Hamnida
~PouTQueen
YourObsessionSuju #5
Chapter 8: Poor Yoona!
daisukizx #6
Chapter 1: While i do like the story, i just have a little bit of constructive criticism for you. Maybe you could try to put more commas because i've noticed that in places where commas're needed, they're often not there and the sentence sounds a little weird haha. But other than that, i think the story sounds good :)
YourObsessionSuju #7
Chapter 4: Aww such a unique and pretty story
yoonhae134 #8
Chapter 3: I agree with denylove
Its great and cute cuz it's yoonhae!!! :)
TheHonestOne #9
Such a cute interesting description so far :)
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