Correcting The Epochs

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Correcting The Epochs

 

 

Zi Tao is cursed.

Zi Tao can control time and therefore, he is cursed. True, you might say that he can use it to his advantage--and he does. But special cases don't always work that way. After eighteen years of tremendous grief because of this god-forsaken ability; he decides to get the clock to stop ticking. 

On the thirteenth of November, Tao will kill himself. 

It would be easy, he thinks. Just jump off a high place and it's an instant death, right? No more live-action replays of time or visiting the future spontaneously. He thinks that the fires of hell would be milder than the flashes of agony he's experiencing with every breath he takes. 

But special cases don't always work that way.

Time won't allow him to call it quits just because he can't bear anymore suffering. 

Instead of the much-awaited gates of afterlife that Tao prepared himself to face just as his feet leaves the rooftop's edge and into the ground; Zi Tao is thrown back thirteen seconds earlier--back to the time when his feet was on the rooftop's surface. 

He jumps once more; only to have the same thing happen to him again and again. 

He can't die.

Once again, time stretches out its hand to stop and control him--getting him stuck right before he puts a stop to everything.

Zi Tao is cursed.  

 

 

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 Somewhere high above, an eye peeks through the clouds, a smile forms on someone's face, and a clock starts ticking; marking the start of a countdown. 

 

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azeli_ouo #1
Chapter 1: @_____@ this makes sense
i think
it makes sense
ermergerd
IT.MAKES.SENSE. this sounds so cool and im already... i cant.... i need this already.
apathetic--
#2
Chapter 1: you troll. i like this whole idea but what's with the replay lol. kris~ stalker are you? lolol just kidding. what is this really. how can something that make no sense makes me this addicted? no sense, really.
sleepyseoul
#3
Chapter 1: I DONT UNDERSTAND WHATS GOING ON BUT I LIKE IT AND IM EXCITED
xingtizen
#4
Chapter 1: I have no clue what I just read either BUT I FCKING ENJOYED IT AND IT'S KRIS AIN'T IT?
bohubear
#5
well, even though at first the idea seems cliche giving that there are so many stories using the MAMA power thing, the way you modeled it it's just original. I can't wait for the chapter and good job on the flawless description.
ll0vex3_her
#6
OH MY GODS this sounds stunning.
ING PERFECT TAOBBY AND HIS ____ING PERFECT ABILITIES.
xingtizen
#7
THANK YOU FOR DUMBING IT DOWN AND SPEAKING ACTUAL ENGLISH

IMMA USE THAT ON PPL NOW!!!!

CAN'T WAIT!!!! PANDA HUANG ZITAO AND HIS TIME POWERS.

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!
PipTheTerror #8
Sounds sweet \o/
Looking forward to it