That Changes Everything

Description

-Super Junior's Happiness playing in the background-

On a beautiful sunny day, a happy family of four decided to have a picnic at the park. They setted up, and started to eat happily. Then the glowing sky suddenly got swallowed by the dark, heavy clouds. It begins to rain and the ground shook, the BGM slowly fades out, trees crashed down on houses. Children screaming everywhere.Fires started out of nowhere.. Enormous amounts of water flooded in from the river...The girl got a tight grip on her little sister and ran as fast as her legs could, but seconds later she fell down, laying there unconciously. Tears flowed down the little sister's eyes as she whispered " Unnie" and fainted.The punishment had began...

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well actually that wasn't a description up there ^ cuz i dont even know how the story will end up. So basically, Minhae loses her parents(they arent confirmed to be dead yet) through an earthquake and tsunami. Left only with her brother, Minhwan, and tries to survive on their own while searching for their parents.Throughout the story many things happen to them : romance, friendship,and etc. She's always been hiding herself and her talents to almost everyone, later she opens up and come out of her shell.

 

 

Characters:

Lee Minhae: Smart, kind/caring, filial, quiet(not shy, but don't have much to say).Lives in Japan with both parents and a 6 yrs. old brother, Lee Minhwan. Goes to I.STAR High School. She has an amazing voice and is a dancing machine, but doesn't show it to others. Minhae is a little bit more than average looking girl. She despises the color pink A LOT. ONE and ONLY best friend is Park Jungsoo. She doesn't get along with people well after the incident. Also a HUGE SuJu fan XD

Park Jungsoo:Nerdy looking guy so of course he's smart. He would be a pretty decent looking guy if he didn't wear those nerdy glasses, suspenders,plaid button-up shirts,and long white socks. Jungsoo had been Minhae's best friend before the incident. Like her he only had one friend. Others saw him as a nerd (his outfits and such) and turned away from him, but Minhae looked upon his personality instead. Jungsoo is very caring, understanding,listens to whatever you have to say,and gives pretty good advices.

Dalmatian-rookie group under Starliment Entertainment. 1 member falls for Minhae at first sight.

ZE:A-trainees under SE also. 

Super Junior-most successful group under SE

Foreword

ahh my first storyy...i'm not very good at writing but i tried my best!

please leave comments,feedbacks and such so i can improve.

if just one person wants me to continue then i will but if not it will end here..so leave me a comment tell me what you think

PS if i wrote something someone else used before please tell me i was just writing whatever came to my mind. dont want to be banned from here.

PROM15E TO BEL13VE ^^

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girlsdedication
#1
man but but my other stories
heechulxjungmin
#2
minmi!! u gotta finish! lol.
girlsdedication
#3
yeah its Teukie's real name.^^<br />
yeah but he is just another guy with the same name in the story lol<br />
just wait and see!
pinkypn #4
Jungsoo is leeteuk real name right, i thought he would still be famous in the story. i hope Minhae and Minhwan gets to stay together and Minhwan dont get lost n the hospital.
girlsdedication
#5
ah! my first comment! (lol excuse me for being so excited ^^)<br />
thanks for reading! ok I'll make it longer :]<br />
Thanks again for the feedback! saranghaeyo <3
pinkypn #6
i like this so far, i wish it was longer