The Last Train to Heaven...

Description

 

Park Geonil.

He wasn't perfect, he was a coward; a guy with painful scars and fears of getting hurt.

He didn't even know why she's still here with him, because sometimes he thinks he was just being selfish.

 

But there's one thing that he knew for sure,

he's deeply, madly in love with her and even though he is to die, 

he wants to die with her by his side.

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"Where are we going Honey?"

"Heaven..."

"Heaven?"

"Dasom-ah... saranghae..."

 

 

 

Foreword

 

 

 

Theme song : Jay Chou - Nocturne

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washupkrease #1
*cries forever*
andreaylen #2
Chapter 5: Its make me cry..i love this story
--hylx
#3
Chapter 5: You! You made me cy again! How dare you!!!!!! >o<
Seriously, you're my favorite author of all time. :3
--hylx
#4
Chapter 4: January 20? Ho Ho Ho~ :3
dongwooandme
#5
Chapter 5: tearing up while reading this. omg poor dasom. geonil too. geonil is so sweet even seconds before he die :') you did very well on this story ^^ congrats and hwaiting for your next story<3
SpeechofSilence
#6
Chapter 5: Wah! This was nice. Even though it wasn't the typical, unrealistic happy ending where Geonil lives, it was wonderful. I really like the imagery that this brings upon. The title nicely fits the story and it just clicked into place so smoothly. Poor Dasom and Geonil, but this is a great story overall.

Your writing is nice and creativity fits well. Keep writing and congratulations on finishing the story! :)
dongwooandme
#7
Chapter 4: omg i love your story. wish you could make it longer though :( anyway, hwaiting for the last chapter. i can't wait :)
butterdilys #8
Chapter 4: I'm am pls make it longer!! U still writing this for the contest?? Good luck!
SpeechofSilence
#9
Chapter 4: Hi~ I've actually been reading sine the beginning, but I've been busy, so I was only able to read the chapters now. Anyway, it's awesome! You write quite well. ^^ The romantic and sentimental parts were nicely laced. I really like it! :)

The storyline is nice. I wonder if Geonil will ever tell Dasom of his condition before he passes away? Or hopefully ho goes through the surgery successfully.

I hope to see an update soon! :D
butterdilys #10
Chapter 3: Good luck in the contest maybe u could make the next chapter the last one then after the contest do a squel