How the Sunflower saved the Sun

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“Hi. Who are you?” I asked.

He seemed to just cry harder and he gripped my hand so tight that it almost hurt. I felt concerned and wanted to know why he was crying, why he was crying for me.

He looked up at me, his eyes overflowing with tears.

Even though he tried to smile I felt something was wrong, really wrong and upsetting him. I had a feeling that it had to do with not knowing who he was or it was about me.

Foreword

This is my first try at writing a sad story and I worked my off to try to make it perfect. 

Something interesting, when first starting this story I was going to have all the "flashes"/sections of the story jumbled up but since I kept adding more parts I thought that would just be too cruel for the reader to try and keep everything straight when I'm not giving you the parts in order. So I only mixed up the end and beginning basically. You'll understand when you read. Reading "Flashes" 1-14 in order go in chronological order but I mixed the ending and begging to give a certain effect. 

Don't kill me after this. I cried too...

Hope you enjoy~

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Daisyflor #1
Chapter 1: This is so sad *weeps*
misskimhee #2
Chapter 1: you make e cried seriously T____T
each time i read about taemin thought just couldn't make me handle the tears to fall down T____T
this fic is awesomely breathtaking...... you successfully broke my heart authornim. thanks </3
Taeminmypants #3
Chapter 1: Ohmygod this is so beautiful TT^TT after all they've been through Jinki would remember right right right? Please say yes ;_;
Ariel97 #4
Chapter 1: Seriously this is just beautiful
I am crying right now, OMG such a beautiful and sad story. Can't this have a sequel where they end up living happy ever after.
exoluxun #5
Chapter 1: O.O i cried! HARD! Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
UltimateFujoshii #6
Chapter 1: T.T you're breaking my heart. I can hear it shattering. Jinki is in his own dilemma, afraid of losing his memories but Taemin is far more in pain when he watched the one he love breaking and slowly forgetting him. I cried like a waterfall when i scrolling down the paragraphs... This is more than sad.. T.T
Erowindangle #7
Chapter 1: Oh my goodness, this was wonderful! :') sad, but wonderful! I even cried. Beautifully written! I want to continue reading their story- Jinki trying to remember, Taemin trying to be strong, read about how true love really conquers all!! ^_^ Please chingu-ah, will you continue?
jinkijeans #8
Chapter 1: omg I am crying like a baby. omg sooo good. I have a lump in my throat. I counted maybe like 4 time crying until it was just constant. My eyes kept getting blurry so I kept wiping them and was trying to focus through my tears. It was sooo good. I love how Taemin just kept on being strong and coming back. True love, plus a hard situation to live through…it felt so real, I felt both their heartache. I even cried when Taemin was about to pour water on the chalk. I was like “nooo hurry, Jinki get to him.” I need a hug now. *hugs*
Emmauk26 #9
i'm looking forward to this but i'm kinda scared too, it's gonna make me cry isn't it; ;-(
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