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DROWNING

 

Waah!! a short poem ahead :)))

 

 

 

Stop pulling my hand

Let me go of your grasp

I don’t like the water for its cold

I’ll make it warm as time goes by

 

 

 

 

We went deeper and deeper

I didn’t know that it is this fun

I’m getting used of the water now

Until you slipped and let me drown

 

 

 

 

You left me all alone

All alone in this cold water

My body turned so rigid, so stiff

That it’s making me hard to breathe

 

 

 

 

I’m choking, barely breathing

All the coldness consumes my weakness

I opened my mouth, where are you now?

The only reply that I got was my drowning sound

 

 

 

 

Helpless, vulnerable, weak – that’s what I am…

That’s what you made me feel

 

 

 

 

Suddenly, you pulled me out from my trance…

Out from my dying state

I’m afraid to get drowned again

Then let’s drown together, you say

 

 

 

 

And right there in your eyes, I feel myself drowning again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

To my dear chingus,

I promise to update after finals. HAHAHAHA. I'm having author's block and lack of time. Until then. XOXO

Feel free to comment your interpretaions or anything you like  :))) I will be happy if you guys will comment and if not, well, what can I do..HAHAHA

 

 

 

 

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Rhavege #1
Chapter 1: Ahh, dear author, you're getting better at writing short stories but with very much impact..More power!!
abigxxx #2
Saranghae chingu <3 <3

Update soon ne?
iLoveNyongdal
#3
Chapter 1: Update soon
Update soon
Update soon
piratess #4
Chapter 1: have lots of think in my mind about ur poem.love it.make me feel want to shout but cant say anything.my life like that now.static and its go deeper.wait for someone to stop it.hmm.and i wait ur update.hehe