Chapter 1: This is quite different with the usual daragon stories so *clap clap clap*. and jiyong is such a bad guy here..he didn't consider the kids and whatever he do, he's married... Ahn sohee is such a sweetheart here. Overall, it's good though you can still add some drama on Dara's side... Being left is quite hurtful but the feelings shown by her lacks.. Oh another, font..I suggest you use the simple font. Though its unique, it's quite difficult in the part of the reader.. Hwaiting!!!
Chapter 1: i hate it...even if u saw ur first love....and u had already had a family can u leave them bec. of that...u had a family and i think u had love them too...hope u think twice before u act...and Sohee...hope u know that GD has a family now and ur breaking their family apart..hope u can consider Gd's children.....thank u authornim for the stories...tc...hope their is a sequel...
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