Insecurities

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It's have been a while since I wrote a fanfic! So before updating my other stories, this is a pratice test. I don't wan't to ruin my stories because of bad english and poor writing skills! So please critique this story. Tell me about what's good what's not!

Foreword

This story is about the Insecurities of Junsu. He's dating Wooyoung and keep comparing himself to Nichkhun, Wooyoung's ex-boyfriend.

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missterious #1
Chapter 1: aish, make me blush with this.

i also want to slap minjun, the way he sees himself. stupid, you are GORGEOUS. stupid stupid.

so, okay you said you wanted help with this so you wouldn't make a mess of your more serious fics. here's a couple of tips:

"His shoulders were a bit too wild..." should actually be 'wide' instead of 'wild' (though i do like the idea of a WILD minjun muahahaha)

"he was look and the floor sadly" would probably make better sense as "he was looking at the floor sadly"
daegupandagurl #2
Chapter 1: Awww su be confident .. I like you more than wooyoung LOL .. I wish you can write a lil more longer ..this is good but too short
Nyaikou #3
Chapter 1: That is so cute, Natacha ^^
poisoncheecks #4
Chapter 1: i need sequel!!! i need it now...woosu <3333 the loves of my life >[]<
su, dont you ever said you're not beautiful...gosh, youre gorjes than ever...
and woobaby is perfect for you~~~~<3
daydreamshs #5
Chapter 1: THIS IS AWESOME 8D woosu~ <3 thank you for writing this ^o^ fighting !
TallMinion #6
Chapter 1: I LOVE IT!!!!
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