SECOND LOVE

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Who said that First Love never dies?

If my first love just give me a suffer, I better choose the second one.

Foreword

This is my first attempt to write stories.

Sorry for the poor language. 

English is not my first language.

But I want to improve it through writing.

Seriously, ~~~

 

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Liza_Blessedx2 #1
Chapter 2: This fic got off to a great start....an intriguing couple of chapters ....What an absolute pity that it has been abandoned!!!!!!!
MusicLover_1808 #2
Chapter 2: Kyu was at the airport waiting everyday for the girl >.< somehow I'm hating on the girl even when I don't know who she is XD and how can Kyu insult Yesung's head?!? I think his head is a very normal size! Hehe Yesung got molested but I mean he is y ^0^
MusicLover_1808 #3
Chapter 1: Aw...the first chapter isn't a fail at all ^^ Hehe I love it <3 And the guy at the airport is such....a meanie XD but I have a feeling that it's Kyu lol but I wonder who is the one that dares to break Yesungie's heart >.<
myimyi1234 #4
Chapter 2: Yesung got molested!!!!!! and he got in trouble on his first day and now he spilt soup on kyu I wonder what's going to happen next.....
charismavi #5
Chapter 2: My..poor yesung..got insulted the first day he came to London, second meet that caused him to be scolded by the lecturer, and molested...Better luck next time (or next ch) yesungie :D
AngelicAngel #6
Chapter 1: Don´t tell me Kyuhyun is the guy who insulted him! 0o0 That guy was mean! This story has started quite interesting already XD I wonder what is going to happen to Yesung in London...Hmmm

Well actually your first chapter is not a fail =) Only your grammar is a little bit off sometimes but that´s what you want to get better at isn´t it? :) So I´ll cheer for you and I´ll be waiting for the next chapter! Hwaiting!! :)

oh! and welcome to the author´s side of AFF XD If you need help with anything at all, it shall be my pleasure to help you :D
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