Chapter 4: Oh oh! Hwaran has finally arrived at the school!
I don't really mimd to see you write in any PoV... As long as it interesting.
And I assume english is not your first tongue, some of your sentence confuses me.
But i know it will get better along the upcoming chapters XD
Arawayoooung! Heheh, you're right eunhaecupcake... Its fun!
Chapter 4: Yay it finally started. Oh! And as ZeroPrincesses said... it's probably better to write it in third person. Mostly because with first person and it switching... for it to work a little better.. if you want to stay with writing first person that is... be a little bit more descriptive with the emotions and thoughts. Because with switching POVs, we're supposed to know internal conflicts and such like how they're struggling... why they feel like something and elaborate on it. But then again it's your fic as authors so you tend to get to call the shots on the POV. I don't mind if it's in POV though it's rare for me to see if in apply fics.
OH! i'm guessing "Ahjussi Oh" is actually the name of the person but the thing is... it's actually supposed to be "Oh Ahjussi". I know it sounds weird but honorifics go after the name in Korean. And I had fun saying "Arawayoung" out loud ^^V
Chapter 4: Yaaaaaaay the story finally started :D I do have one advice to give as I learned a lot from writing my own fanfictions. I think it will save you a whole lot of time if you write in third person or 'no ones pov' and also the readers will probably like it more too instead of changing from one POV to another. I personally find that confusing. But otherwise it's a good start ^^
Chapter 3: Hi author nims :D I already made an application as Song Eun Mi but I was wondering if I should make another application as a guy since you need a few more male students.
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