Daggers, Guns and Beautiful Women

Description

             When the world proclaims you as insane, as someone who is not to be trusted, as someone who has not a mind of their own, what would you do? Would you cry pretty little tears and acknowledge your disability, would you shake your head resolutely and refuse to heed them or would you live on like they told you to, but knowing perfectly well they're the ones who need to be caged? 

             Cho Kyuhyun; he has lived in a cage of an institution for more than half his life. He has forgotten the sounds of the birds, the ruffle of the winds and the cries of the river. He has forgotten how rain falls gently on the muddy floor and the earth laps it up eagerly. He has forgotten it all. He lives on in the present, a deathly, sombre soul. He knows vaguely that his life has been rudely taken away from him; but he cares not, because he has someone to love. 

             He loves. He loves like a beast. He saves. He saves like a hero. He kills. He kills like an assassin. 

Foreword

This is an entry for kawaiilove's 

Creative Ecstasy Writing Contest

You know what you should do? You should join the contest. Yes, you! Go join, yeah?

 

 

 

Prompt: Not as it seems but what it looks like (Picture Prompt 3)

Word Count: 3,457

Comments

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shining_writer #1
Chapter 1: The description of Kyuhyun's lover set me thinking about who she is. At first I thought he was really in love with a mute woman. But then as I read, I realize that Kyuhyun has a fascination for weapons, obsessed so much that they are certainly real in his eyes.

Obsession makes people lose perspective.

What a masterpiece.
Prom15e13elieve10ve
#2
Chapter 1: My freaking gosh this is another awesome masterpiece.
You are so amazing.
100percentASIAN #3
Chapter 1: That was so good! I just really love the way you wrote it. It totally went along with the prompt because you made us think that it was a woman but you described the "her" like a dagger. I hope you win the contest!^^
expectations
#4
Chapter 1: Oh dear, I thought he had a real girlfriend and as the story goes on, I got curious what this 'thing' is. Who would have thought that— it's a dagger. And the new 'girlfriend' is a gun. This is just so beautifully written and I applaud you, really.
caitykoala #5
Chapter 1: This was amazing! The way you portayed his insanity, I actually believed he had a real woman at first. You have an incredible talent for writing!
jasminealderira
#6
Chapter 1: OMG this is a really cool fic! How you wrote it is really (and I meant it coz I've read a lot of fanfics) professional! Make more dark evil Kyuhyun fanfics will ya? I'm encouraging you and expecting more....If can, make a girl companion for Kyuhyun? Just as evil as him kekekekekeke
jungbanhap
#7
Chapter 1: This is so perfectly described. I feel like I'm the insane person there LOL
Loved it.