For Better Or Worse

Description

 


L runs into a mysterious girl one afternoon and notices some suspicious-looking bruises before she runs off. When she goes back to find him weeks later, will he and his brothers at cafe INFINITE LOVE be able to heal her wounds or simply make matters worse?
 



 

Foreword

 

Genre: Angst

POV: First

Characters: L (Kim Myungsoo), unnamed OCINFINITE, T.O.P

WARNING: Contains themes of abuse and domestic violence. Later chapters will be labeled [M] for such content.
 




POSTER AND REVIEW CREDITS HERE
 

If you want to translate this fic, please PM me for permission first. If I am informed of an unauthorized translation, I will report the offending party. Thank you.
 




Copyright 2012 (c) GothicMermaid. All rights reserved.

Disclamer: I don't own INFINITE, nor do I own T.O.P. Only thing that's mine is the idea and the story itself.

Please don't copy. Stealing is prohibited. Translating and posting it elsewhere without permission is also prohibited.

*Not that you'd do something that horrendous to me... (I hope)*

**I know the whole copyright thing isn't legit, but hey...**

 



Panda-Chu
Okay, I apologize for the story updates you'll be getting from here... I'm getting my story reviewed and posters made, and will be updating as needed.

Comments

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cherLynmyung #1
Chapter 12: Love this so much!! It's Si different from others ♡
KaiOlly
#2
Chapter 12: Well, author-nim I'm here to give you the review that I made for this story. Ok, here goes! :)

1. Fore word - 90/100

The foreword is good. It has pics and a good synopsis. The poster is nice to. The infos are good to. Noting much to comment really

2. Pictures - 90/100

The pics you put on the foreword is still not enough. I could only say that the poster suits well with the story. It give u the vibe :) Better you added in more pics.

3. Story plot - 95/100

I'm in love with your story plot! The story plot us well written and it's really interesting. The genre angst really works well with tis story. I say good one! :D

4. English - 96/100

It was a pleasant use of English that u used to describe it all. The English is not bad and the vocal is good too! I think that anyone that reads it would most likely find it pleasing :)

5. Writing style - 96/100

I sort of liked your writing style in this story! The way you write it, is easy for me to get the atmosphere, the feelings and to understand the whole story :) Although, there are a few parts that I find quite hard to catch, still it's something that you shouldn't worry bout.

6. Total markings : 93%

Some marks you got there! Overall, I think that this story is really amazing! I enjoyed reading this! It makes me want to read this non-stop, but unfortunately, I must stop and good thing must come to an end. The story has its perfect ending, even though it's a sad one. I liked it how you relate the domestic violence in this story and gave out advice for the readers, it's nice of you to do that. I shall say, thank you for writing this kind of story and madew me enjoyed reading it ^^~

Lastly, thank you s much for choosing 'Butter Review Shop' to review your marvellous fic! Hope that you are not offended/pissed/angry at me. So, we are still cool, yea...? :D See you next time! (^_^)V *sorry for the typos*
KaiOlly
#3
Chapter 12: Yes you are correct! 100% correct!
KaiOlly
#4
Chapter 11: Oh my gawd.... Seriously, this chap is really sad T.T I can't believe that she died. Serve Seunghyun rights for treating her that way. I wish that Myungsoo would just beat the hell out of him.
KaiOlly
#5
Chapter 2: OMOG! Myungsoo and a marred woman?! How bad can he get? ^^
KaiOlly
#6
Chapter 1: Nice 1st chap! It's really....short and simple :)
JungChaeWon #7
Chapter 2: Omg i love your poster!!! Nice fic!!
-2Mirae-
14 streak #8
Chapter 12: This story is so sad!!! I hate how there are those type of people in this world T.T i feel sad for her and her children and L.....
Anyways..... I cried in almost every chapter ;A; ♥
cuteheartbreaker13
#9
Chapter 12: I luv the story but its sooo sad TT^TT
inSHININGspirit
#10
Chapter 12: OMG this is the first story which i read which made me cry. :') I agree that domestic violence is not a joke. i really love your style of writing btw. ^^