That XX

Description

With winter comes that bitter cold, for Kwon Jiyong it was only filled with precious memories.

 

For years, he stood by his side.

For years, he waited patiently for him to realise his true feelings.

Yet that day would never come.

Now, winter only brought him pain.

 

(wow what a terrible description...)

Foreword

This is just a short story I wrote on my day off today.

This is me getting my angsty feelings off my back ha ha. Plus after listening to GD's new song there was no way that I couldn't write something.

What an amazing song! If you haven't heard it go listen now!

 

 

-cough-

Anyway this is my first oneshot on here. I just wanted to take a break from my chartered fanfic, it gets a bit tedious writing it after a while. I wanted to write something different for once. This is the horrible outcome...ha na

Anyway, please enjoy!

 

 

 

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sam_bel
#1
Chapter 1: This is truly beautiful and mesmerizing . I wish a got to read it sooner.
I don't know if you are still writing Fanfics or not, but i really hope that you'll do a sequel to this story. It's heartbreaking to see Jiyong suffering without notice. I think he deserves a happy ending. Either he will get Seungri by his side (that's what we are yearning for) or at least give him his closure where he find someone to heal his broken heart.

PS : this song is actually my FAVORITE song ever. It always gets me to tears. I was in Seungri's shoes. I didn't know what was going on behind my back.

Sorry for blabbering on like this. But like i said this song is so special to me. And i would really want a decent ending to it.

Thank you.
fluffycloud448
#2
Chapter 1: I hate you so much for this beautiful unfulfilling story.
I cried harder than i should because i was listening to 'That XX' on repeat while reading this and followed all the lyrics too.
Just one chapter and you managed to pull my heartstrings in such a way that i was weakened to the point of dropping down on my knees as my soul leaves my body, thankfully i was sitting at my kitchen table and only managed to faceplant on it.
I Love/hate this story. I hate it because GD goes theough so much pain.
I love it because...
1. I ship GRi they are so friggin cute.
2. Awesome writing style.
3. Awesome description.
4. Relatable plotline(hits right at home).
5. Realistic situations, occurances and moments between characters(a that won't let go).
6. The fact that the translated lyrics are there and fit into the situation perfectly.
7. The time skips where you know alot of important stuff has happened but don't know what the stuff is. (imagination should kick in)
8. Jiyong's pain and breaking heart that you can clearly see in every paragraph. (it hurts so good...lol sorry)
9. The last bomb that seungri's character detonates by telling Gd that he's going to propose to the she witch that's playing around with him. (the end makes you love it because you know that life isn't fair)
10. Did i mention that i think GRi is friggin cute, and that i adore them!

I love/hate you so much. My inner cheesy side craved for a happy ending for the GRi couple, but i know if they ended up together it won't be an awesome interesting story.

Anyways thankyou for writing this, it's absolutely beautiful, and now i shall go scavenge and read through your collection of fanfiction ;')
good luck with stuff in the future!

Lots o'love!
Fi-fi
TOPcorn
#3
Chapter 1: Love love love~
I think we've all been in a similar situation.
This story was such a fitting accompaniment to the song.
It tied in so well and tugged at all of my delicious angst feels.
Adored it. Byootiful work, lady. <3
kwonxxleader #4
Chapter 1: ugh, I hate the ending but I looovee how u written it. Hey, I'm not a er for happy endings but GRi is tooooo good for each other just to end like that. </3
tabingu007 #5
Chapter 1: if i was gd i would wait until ri and her were together in a public place and then grab him and kiss him...show her and the world who he belongs to. ah~ this is so sad. I'm listening to GD's Without You (Eventually) and it's made the story even more sad. can i cry? is it right for me to cry? hahahaha
fiona_kwon
#6
Chapter 1: u wrote it so well. i can feel the pain. thank you!
raya_VIP #7
OMG !!!!
your story FIT perfectly with GD's beautiful and perfect song !!!!!!!!
BunnySunmi
#8
So beautiful~ ;A;