Confidence Is Key: A Look Into a Teenage Girl’s Thoughts (Oneshot)

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It's my first fanfic I guess. PLEASE LEAVE ME SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, I DESPERATELY NEED IT. Thanks! :)

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-tastethelime #1
Chapter 1: Omo, I want you to continue this! >< It's so adorableee~ djkljg
JJeanWS #2
ashy, since my phone refuses to make me capable of typing stuff into the reply box, I guess I'll type it here.
That explanation is actually longer than my response itself...it's 11:30pm and I'm using bigger words (oh gosh, a couple of hours and I'll think I'm some sort of scholar) anyway, I got really offtopic...thanks! I love your writing too! (And the fact that you write more often than i do XD)
I'm gonna try to start on that oneshot i promised you, like, two months ago... whoops #^_^
Aryala
#3
you're just like, an amazing writer, ya know. so I subscribed to you :P <333
JJeanWS #4
yeah I know, I wrote it at, like, 12 at night on my phone so I had no clue how long it was and my arms cramped up. Haha
the next oneshot/fic will be long(idk what it is yet, I mean I started writing it and it's like 3 pages on word so far, but I don't know where I stand at the moment in terms of having enough content)
maddieline456
#5
I actually quite like your writing style. It's cute and fluffy. I'll be looking forward to your fics in the future!
Oh and the story was a bit short (but it still had enough cute and comedic parts to make up for the length AND I get that it's your first time writing and stuffs so.. yeah!)
JJeanWS #6
yup :)
but then again, most fangirls are...or at least I am
BLAQhyung
#7
looking at his ?????
what a girl keke
Aryala
#8
LOL!!! story of every fangirls life. y thoughts about his ___ xD