Broken

Description

Life hardly seems fair when Sungjong receives that phone call; left alone, he slowly loses his grip on those precious to him. The Infinite members try to continue to support their maknae through his depression, but soon the lack of an explanation for the younger's sad state causes Sungjong's favourite and most dependable hyung to lash out. Broken and alone, Sungjong finds himself staring at the rocky ground that welcomes him nearly 100 feet below.

Foreword

The members pile out of the dorm yelling of plans for their last day of vacation and Myungsoo joins the crowd only to go to the local variety store for the younger’s favourite candy. The boy finally breaks his concentration as the door slams, glancing back at the empty and soundless dorm with bloodshot eyes. Stabs of pain burst through his body as he imagines thick barbed wire encircling him, spikes scraping and scarring - an illusory equivalent to the pain in his heart.  

 

His fingers twitch, memories of his phone vibrating with that call. Life seems to have cruelly chosen him to remain alone...

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**As a challenge, my friend (akire18) and I were given the same prompt and we each wrote our own stories for it. You can read her version here http://artistic2011.livejournal.com/1531.htmlThis is my version of the prompt~

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AdrianaInspirit
#1
Chapter 1: Awww good job !! <3
I really love it !
Aziralc01 #2
Chapter 1: I can't Understand . It's Just , the Story is too deep for me to understand
princessgumball
#3
Chapter 1: Why do angst fanfics following me and why do I like this much to suffer this way? ;____;
I'm crying but I'm liking this so damn much! I don't even know what to say D:
My heart..... </3
I was amazing~
KpopEscape
#4
I can't seem to find akire18 one, could you help me? I love this! It's rare to find a story which ends on such a note but I really think you did it justice :)!
ryeowookimnida
#5
Chapter 1: AAAAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHH NOOOO BOYS COME BAAACCKK HOLD ON TO MY HAND!!!!
u-kissforever
#6
-flips tables- omgg whyyy -cries- this is so sad. Beautiful, but sad as fudge. Excuse me while I cry my heart out.
lemonkpoplover #7
I've always liked this kind of endless ending...it was sadly beautiful...love remains even if they are no longer together...kinda like my perception of love. Thank you for this..
ShawolMvpElf #8
Oh my god this is the best angst oneshot that I've read in such a long time!
You rock at description! Hope you keep writing MyungJong fics~!