Colder Than Steel

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He didn't mean to do it.

Everyone has the wrong impression.

Why won't they listen ?

It's not like that.

 

 

 

- One-shot inspired by Big Bang's Monster

 

 

Foreword

This idea came to me yesterday while I was listening and looking at the lyrics to Monster. It really is one of my favorite songs; the raw emotion in the vocals and the lyrics is absolutely enthralling. If you haven't listened to the song or seen the video, I highly recommend it; I simply adore Big Bang. 

I hope to update this, along with several of my other fics, sometime around Friday / the weekend. 

Please enjoy and comment !


Edit: I changed the title from Cold Steel to Colder Than Steel, so please do not be confused that there is a slight difference. I simply decided that I prefer the latter one.

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gokulex59 #1
Chapter 1: You made an emotionless person like me cry. I've known as someone who doesn't give a damn to any of "dramatic" stuff, but you. made. me. cry. I can't help it, I understood Minseok so well that I felt the SAME heartbreak. No, not sympathized, FELT the same. While reading, I was Minseok and Lu Han was my savior, only to betray me later... Of course, not that I don't understand him, he's right, and his reaction his only normal. But I still wish he had at least talked to Minseok. I told you, I was Minseok while reading it; I felt the hurt when his last string to life was torn when Lu Han looked at him like anyone else.

Not everyone can write good enough to make someone feel all these. Great, amazing, prefect; I can't come up with an adjective that is enough to describe your writing skill here. So, pick your own compliment; I'm kind of shaken here, as you can see.
smiley44 #2
Chapter 1: Why did you do this to xiumin? *sobs* why did you make luhan run away from xiumin? Whyyyy?! That isn't unfair for xiumin. He loves him so much ;A;
bambino #3
Chapter 1: *sigh*
Poor Minseok. Poor Luhan. Poor me and all my XiuHan feels. lol
I like this story, but maybe bcoz it's a oneshot and it's quite short, it doesn't really connects with me yet. But I like the story ideas, and how you portrayed things that are happening in the story. :3
Can't wait for more stories from you, yay! \o/
candymints #4
Chapter 1: its so unfair.
why.
SweetTaboo #5
Chapter 1: Fffffffffffffffff
I
I was so close
To crying
Oh GOD
BabyYoo #6
why it has to be xiumin??? TT^TT
BabyYoo #7
Omg I love monster and the deep meaning of its lyrics! So gonna subscribe<3
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