Give Me 120 More Years

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This story has been biting me ever since I've decided the plot for my next story after Defence. So I've decided to post up at least the forwards part of the story. Everything I'm writing now is bound to change some time in the future, keep that in mind.

This will be a first story in which I will also be adding some fantasy stuff. If you've read my other stories you'll know that I don't work with fantasy elements much. However, do enjoy =D

I'm basing this story off a hmong song. I'm going to post up two versions of the video: The english subbed one and the fanmade one.

 

***Take note that the names I use in this story are just to represent the images of the characters. I'm a fan of all these idols so don't take anything I write personally.


What else inspired me to start this story? 

There was a play/musical at our club's annual 24th conference a year ago. The play had a big impact on me and I was in tears by the end of it along with many others. 

The play revolved about the hmong culture. It was about two people who were deeply in love with each another. This play was so creative, it mixed the past and the present together. In the past this couple fell in love, however, because of circumstances the guy couldn't marry the girl and was forced to marry another woman. The girl was left with heartbreak and nothing else. The guy tried to come back for her but she refused to open the door for him. During that moment she took pills and killed herself. Her sisters and parents came back home to find her in his arms.

This play transitions to the present where the two are now with the same last names. Let me inform you that in our hmong culture two people who have the same last names cannot fall in love, it's taboo. They fight and bicker. However, the girl and the guy keep on having unexplainable dreams about their past. The play transitions back and forth from the present to the past and past to present. The two characters get closer throughout the play. When the girl becomes so heartbroken about her past she cries so much, blacks out, and gets hospitalized. There she dreams that she is in another realm alone draped in a white dress. She sees her sisters crying as they walk pass and just as they pass she sees him walking by singing a sad, lonely song. She tries to hug him but cannot reach him. 

It comes back to the present where she wakes up in the hospital. Now, the ending of the play is the most complicated. As she leaves the school he chases after her and they come to a bus stop where he takes her hand. Because they are two people with the same last name would they overstep that boundary for love or would the two of them walk on their separate ways? 

The president of our club stated something which stuck in my memory like glue. He said, "Back then they weren't able to be together, but in the present the two are already together. They have the same last names. They're already one family." 

 

***This play was very sad and memorable. The actors and actresses did great with their roles. It was truly a touching play. Just thought I'd share since in this story Nana and Onew will both go back to the past then come back to the future with struggling feelings. 

Foreword

It's something that comes and go without the eye seeing

It's something invisible that we only feel

It comes in many different forms, shapes, and sizes

It's something real, so treat it right when you know it's there

When it slips out of our grasp there aren't many chances that we'll be able to retrieve it back

"This is...our last lifetime together..."

 

Characters: (I'm going to keep this simple)

Onew: a radio announcer. Rude and thoughtless, likes having a lot of girls over for parties. Rich son of independent successful career holders. 25 years old

NaNa: a psychic. Hardworking, naive, is a trickster, and she also knows more than she tells other people.  Parents - unknown. 25 years old.

Krystal: Onew's dongsaeng. Nice and leanient but also a bit possessive and pitiful. Still a university student. 23 years old.

Lee Joon: NaNa's ex boyfriend. Ruthless but he's also got some heart in him. Program Director of Seoul Radio Station. 25 years old.

Kim Jung Ah - Onew's love interest ever since he started college. The two of them have been interested in each other but have never started a relationship. Now, she works with the Investigative Bureau and through Nana she meets Onew again. 

   ***Added April 29, 2011. 

 

Synopsis:

Brought to life NaNa does not know her parents, who they are, or if they even existed. While growing up she's discovered that she carried strange powers, psychic powers. Sometimes she works with the police and other times she does miscellaneous jobs. It isn't until one day when immature Onew opens his door to find Psychic NaNa standing at his door claiming that he is in danger that his life begins to unravel before him. Annoyed and irritated with her insistent nagging that he heed her warnings they have a fight by the pool one day. After falling in they travel through time together and through this journey Onew peices his strange dreams together and finds himself with a challenge he's never confronted before: putting the past and the present together and making sense of it. Throughout this drama both sides find themselves faced with romance caught in a web. In the end, will Onew lose Nana or will NaNa lose Onew? 

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_Taemi_
#1
Chapter 58: i love reading it. it was my first time reading a onew nana story and i really enjoyed it
MingyusPampers #2
That was great
Inspiritlover12
#3
Wah! Ur plot is uber awesome! Seriously, urs is the greatest fantasy story i hve every read! Becos of ur great plot, great choice of characters, great poster,incredible love story, incredible fantasy thingy about the daggers and well yeah! Its uber great! Lurve it uber uber uber much! U sud write more story about fantasy since u hv a great imaginiation or mayb a sequel??? Yeah! U did great in writing this story
-ItsJustMe- #4
LOVE THIS SO MUCH~!
tenmachan
#5
finish!oh my god..perfect!!! the plot is awesome!! the part when they fight against time..i was standing while read it,shouting at my lappy screen saying "no~~ what going happen to them!!" //silly kids <br />
u such a great author... gonna read more of ur stories,,, :)
tenmachan
#6
ur comments make me scare...already 5.30 am..i cant sleep till i finish this this but im just at chapter 18
tenmachan
#7
love the poster at chapter 15..suit the best
tenmachan
#8
reading this while secret by jay chou is turn on another tab ^^
tenmachan
#9
oh my..chapter 4 is creepy..esp when u read at 4 am...
tenmachan
#10
kyaa..at last i have time to read this!!!! i know u a great writer since i have read Forever Chingu..but its a little bit awkward becoz i never read any fanfiction that have no taeteuk..Keke..but i will read all your storie..[i got 3 month with nothing to do:)] i will post many comments later..^^