Saying Goodbye Is The Hardest Part

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They've spent the whole summer together and now it's finally time for Yoona to move across the country to attend Sarah Lawrence College. How will Kai take it? YoonKai one-shot fanfiction.

Characters:

  

Im Yoona & Kai

Foreword

 

I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY, BUT JUST READ IT AND COMMENT! AND PLEASE SHOW SOME LOVE TO OUR LOVELY COUPLE YoonKai~ Don't bash them and also show some love to LuYoon! Hehehe~ my OT3! ^^

  

  

  

 

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iloveyoongexo #1
Chapter 1: this is the best story love you yoonkai and luyoon
pop-bh #2
<3 Yoonkai
fawnbeybe #3
Aww. What a sad ending. I almost cried >.<
Chang1995 #4
Can you tell me where you got one of the gif from? The one where Kai was fixing the pillow and yoona was looking at the puppy?

Thank you for the story! I love it:)
yoongyoon #5
Please continuw writing sequels for this story^^
asian_hotti396 #6
The story is pretty angst but sweet, especially YoonKai moments! <3
Wow! I didn't know you were a non-English speaker until I read sarangkimchi's comment! Indeed, you really surprised me! :) This is very, very well-written! I was amazed, really, and felt astonished too haha.
I haven't read any YoonKai fanfics in a long time...there's barely any )); but I'm glad you wrote this ^^
YoonKai is such a sad pairing tbh. I really like them even though I'm a hardcore LuYoon shipper LOL.

You should make a sequel of this story! :DD It's sad to see Yoona leaving and Kai was holding back his tears. And then they kissed //sobbing...beautiful <3
I really like this! ^__^ Fighting author-nim!
sarangkimchi7 #7
You're kidding me right? This is truly amazing for a non-English speaker!
You story had a bit of an angst and sweet feel! I really like it!
Even though there's a feel grammars here and there (especially with your "in" and "on" and a few of the verbs) and your "extras", everything else was well-written!
You really surprised me kk ^^
From now on, don't be shy anymore when you want to update a story cause look at this, the fanfic is awesome! I hope you will write more in the future!
You have the potential to go beyond :)

If I could make a suggestion, then i would say that for this story, you should write it separately for the dialogue.
Like when the characters are talking, each of them should be in a separate sentence instead of having it in a paragraph. :)
Otherwise, everything else is nice!

The story is actually very, very simple but the theme behind it is pretty sad but meaningful.
Simplicity is always the prettiest to me :)
Yoona having to leave her family was heartbreaking :/
And the part when Kai was fighting to prevent his tears from falling out was so freaking sad. D;

They kissed!! NDKSJJEKDNSKNDNFNFNFN!! <33333 <3 -imagining-
Oh how I wish it's true in real life. <3
And when Kai put the ring on Yoona's hand and asked her to promise him when she come back, she have to marry him was the sweetest. <3

I honestly really like it and again, you really surprised me ^_^
I hope you will write more fanfics in the future.
You really have potential, dear and if you continued to practice, you will be better.
Practice makes things perfect :)
Hwaiting!! ^^
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