Chapter 1: .... Onew Appa? Lol wut? That made me smile a bit.

But this was rather hard to picture since it's ONEW for crying out loud. I never would imagine that he would be so scary.

I want to know how the parents reacted once they find Taemin dead. Maybe Onew never loved him or he was being harsh because of stress and tough love for his son. I don't know...could you make a sequel?

It's supposed to be depressing and sad, but I can't help but to laughed like crazy when I saw 'Onew appa'

so sad and depressing :( though I have to admit I burst out laughing when I read that Onew is his appa :P poor Taemin though, and Luna too, though she should run away with him from Onew.