The Bride Killer

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He lurks in the darkness of those last free nights.

He's the fear that grabs a hold of your heart, making the adrenaline rush through your veins while the screams are climbing up your throat without ever escaping your mouth.

He's never alone. He's never doing it alone. There are always three of him. The sane one, the love holder and the sick one.

He  'Jack the Ripper' of the brides, a monster.

He is...The Bride Killer!

 

 

 

June the 6th, 1986.

Her date of birth was the one that sealed her fate, creating the Number of the Beast.

She's a free soul, an artist that creates on paper another reality for the 21st century, a painter that writes novels, a writer that paints in different colors the world she sees before her eyes. 

She's the creator .

She is...Cheon Na Rae, the manhwa artist!

 

 

 

"911, what's your emergency?"

"He's here."

 

Foreword

 

Exerpt from Chapter oo1...

 

...

Police sirens echoed in the still night’s air. The crowd was trying to see what was going on inside the house that was surrounded by the yellow tape with the black, bold words: DO NOT CROSS. The police maneuvered their way around carefully, in total silence. They were all waiting.

“What was the emergency that you had to call me home on my free day?” A man dressed in a black suit got off from a white BMW.

“Detective Park! There was another murder,” an officer approached the man.

“And you called me out just for that?! I was dreaming about an exotic island when you-”

“This one is different.”

The detective turned around to face the old and fat officer who had approached him and glared at him with clear annoyance.

“There’s no such thing as ‘different’ when it comes to murders,” the younger one replied while slipping his hands into his white, rubber gloves. “Lets get through with this!” Without any hesitation , he crossed the yellow tape.

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Special thanks to @ziniime, for the graphics! Thank you!

Special thanks to@danlyy, the best beta reader ever! Thank you for helping me out!

Special thanks to my dearest friend @BennieDerHamster, who made a cameo appearance in my fic(she's the other non-idol person that appears in the fic)! Thank you!

And this is an entry for the short-fic contest held at JannCakes Short Story Contest (OPEN)

Thanks for the review to -CherryBlossoms from ♚ Arts of Royalty {Graphics & Reviews}!

Thanks for the review to EternalLove from Lady Comma's Reviews

 

Comments

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HzLicious
#1
Chapter 2: Seriously,i just finished reading this and. . .woww,i like your writing style.
Even I was kinda confused at first.
I'm wondering if victoria was burried alive.poor her.
PanicInParadise
#2
Ok, so I finally finished reading it and I must say I liked it a lot. The ending especially was very well planned and I like tha fact that it wasn`t clear what it happened next.
I bet most of the readers were wondering if she managed to escape the coffin, if someone noticed she was alive or if she got burried alive. It was an unexpected ending but it fit well with the story :)
Other than that the writing style is great and I like the fact that you give so much importance to details. ^^
PanicInParadise
#3
Hi~~ New subscriber here :)
Kiky00joker told me about this fanfic and it got my attention
yep, it's just my style :)
kiky00joker
#4
Chapter 2: Alright so I finally realized that I haven't commented at this ff...I swear I wanted to but until I the laptop I guess I forgot.
So, I must say that Himchan is my absolute bias and y-you...you just made him a psyhopat!!!!! I like it >.< It was a surprise to read the second chapter because it was freaking violent. I wasn't expecting something like that from you but then again, you are always full of surprises XD
blazensaddles #5
Chapter 2: Damn...... This was a really good story!!! I like it!!!! Aw the poor fetus :( and Simon :/ HimChan you y murderer ;)
Shiny_sushi
#6
Chapter 2: So wow....horrible I got to say it but in a way I liked your story, but omo I'm still shivering!! *shocked* XDD
It was cool! Good job!
gGiakh
#7
Chapter 2: wow that's totally awesome. even tho' i didnt get the ending i "wanted" but who cares .
so violent that i can say it freaked me out but i loved it .
durian2003 #8
Chapter 2: OMG!!!! THIS TOTALLY AWESOME!! LOVE U!!! Keep up the good work!! Srsly, i have yet to read that's as Gory as this!! *thumbs up!*