『r i l a k k u m a ' s ♡ m e l o d y』 review shop *:･ﾟ✧{{BUSY/HIRING}}✧･ﾟ:*
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Rilakkuma's Melody Review Shop
★{ Rules }★
▶please be patient◀
▶Tell me what you think about my review◀
▶If you add my review into your story, please credit.◀
▶If your story is longer than 20 chapters, I'll only read up to 20 chapters, unless it's really good.◀
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✿>Form<✿
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Story title
Story Link
How many chapters are there? [thus far]
Has your story been reviewed before?
Is your story Rated M anywhere?
Anything else you want to add?
»Evaluation card«
Title (5)
Does the title pick up my interest? Is it related to the story? Is there any overuse of symbols? Is the capitalization correct? What tone that the title expressed?
Description/Foreword (15)
Is it making me want to read more? Does it give a broad image of the story? Does it pick up my curiosity much and urge me to click 'next' right away? Does it give too much information and ruin the plot? Is it related to the main plot?
Plot (25)
Is there any twist? How is the concept and the idea of the story? Does the plot excite me and keep me on the edge? Is the main conflict interesting? How is the opening? How is the ending (if it's completed already)?
Characters (20)
Is the characters developing? Do they did something that out of their personality? Are all of their actions logical? How is the concept of the characters?
Flow (10)
Does the story move too fast or too slow? Is there any unexpected cliffhanger? How is the author cut the scene from the end of a chapter to the next?
Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling (15)
Is there any misspeling? How are the tenses? Is there any wrong capitalization of words? How is the author's writing style? Is there any miss in putting the punctuation? Is the paragraph too long? Is there a proper space between the lines and paragraphs?
Overal Enjoyment (10)
This will be based on personal opinion. The score above are based on target audience and as general as possible.
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Foreword
{ Chapter one }
My KPOP Idols Are Wizards
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{ Chapter two }
Safe Places
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{ Chapter three }
Slave: Betrayal [Super Junior Version]
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{ Chapter four }
Au Revoir
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{ Chapter five }
Mercy 자비
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{ Chapter six }
Abominable
{ { w a i t i n g l i s t } }
If I have more than 6 requests to do, I put my shop on BUSY until my requests go below 5.
Note: you can still request but know it'll take a little more time ^^;
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Impossible Love
When She is Sick
The Many Faces of Love
A Man Outside, A Kid Inside
Everyday is a Sunday Evening
Who Do You Think I Am?!
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