Part 2

I really like their conversation about her hair. I find it really positive and cheering, when she said that her hair seems to be lifeless, but she likes its color. :) And even Kibum likes her hair a lot. :)

Aww, a little bit intimate moment between them – when he touched her hair. :D She is smart that she took advantage of that moment and wipped off his makeup. :)

Ahhh, so she is his girlfriend! :D Yay! Aww, I am so happy that she has girlfriend who has so much understanding for him. ♥

I find it really charming that she offered him that she would take off her „beautiful layers“, too. It wach really touching for me, because I could clearly see that it would make him feel a little bit better and she cares. ^^

No wonder she felt bad when she saw that Kibum thinks he is ugly. :/ It would be painful for ayone who is close to him.
But I really like one saying – „Butterflies can't see their wings. They can't see how beautiful they are, but everyone else can. People are like that.“

It is really nice to see that they have couple rings. :)
I wonder what he would feel when I would say that I love him because of his personality and not because of his looks. Yes, he is very handsome, but my heart was stolen by his character. :)

Key, I think I read somewhere that 80+% of women are not satisfied with their look. ^^“ But you know, nobody is perfect. ;)
Awww, it was so sweet how she kissed every body part which he didn´t find ok. :D
To be honest, I really love Kibum´ s eyes and lips/smile. :)
Good job Kyo, you returned him his smile! :D
Wow, she is an artist! :D I would love to see her pictures! *___* Of course, it was touching for Key. :D :D

Kyaaaa, they kissed! :D :D ♥__♥ I am so happy! :D :D Yay! :D
Yeah, Key, remember her words – you are gorgeous inside and out! ;) You always were and always will be gorgeous. ;)

I really enjoyed your fanfic a lot. It was much sweeter and deeper than I expected, which made me happy. Really good point of view and writing style! ^^

Part 1
It made me laugh when taemin came only in sweat pants to open the door. XDD
Aww, Taemin with wet hair must look really handsome. :D

All missing a shirt? :D Hmmm... XDDD

The situation with scared Jjong must have been so funny. :D
Haha, trying to please noona by saying she looks pretty? XDD Good try, but not enough. XDD

I find it really interesting that Kyo could scare / get so much respect from Shinee. :D
OMG, her comments are hilarious. Yeah, they need a reality check. XDD Haha, calling Key by „wonderful diva“ nick? :D She has a soft spot for him, right? :D

Yeah, Key can be moody, but the "moody period" is difficult for both sides - for the one who is moody and for people who have to face up the moody person. :/

I really liked that he smiled when he noticed Kyo and then he wrapped his arms around her waist. :) So sweet. ^^

I feel sad when Key feels down. :/
Poor Key, having issues with self-esteem is a difficult matter. :/ I hope this issue won´t be so serious in future...
I would like to believe that Key is much more confident than I think, but I think his almighty and confident image is just a mask and protective shelter for him. T__T

Honestly, I do hope he doesn´t beat himself up about every little thing... T___T

Yeah, sometimes people are really bad, but they should not make fun of somebody because of look or weight. >.<

Aww, she is so lucky that she sat on his lap. :D I wonder if his hair is soft. :) I am glad that she didn´t give up and brushed his hair. I think brushing hair can be very calming, too. :)

It is true, Kibum, you look very handsome with any hairstyle and any look you have. ;) I think Kyo was really nice to him, it makes me happy. :)
I am really glad that she was with him, when he had his own moments...

I can understand that he doesn´t feel comfortable when she stripped him of his „beautiful layers“, but Kibum is a person who is very beautiful especially inside. And I do think that character is more important than a look. :)

It sounds very interesting, I am curious about your fanfic. ;)