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Pure Snow

Hai........

This is the rewrite..........

Can't wait for your comment

Nana’s POV

We are the destiny, oppa......

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*Me at  10 years old and You at 11 years old

~Author~

The temple was so quite, there was just one girl and one boy who kneeled down and folded their  hands, praying.  It’s cold, their  breath beady and the snow was touched their white skin.

This was 30 minutes passed, but they  didn’t seem to move, still praying even their  hair now covered with snow.

“Nana, it’s enough, let’s go home....”   Tha girl, Nana, nod and stood up.  Her heart still sad and shattered if this day came. The December, a very cold memories of her family.

They both walked under the snow, so white and pure, holding hands, feel warm in another grasp even the air was cold.

“Oppa....it’s the sixth winter  for you in this town, so it means your appa will back home next year, right?”   They see straightly to the road, not facing each other ,     “Yes, I hope so...” .    Then they separated in T-intersection. It was far enough when Nana turned her  head and  saw Mir,  yes the boy was Mir. This boy is her best friend forever, he was the one who always supports her even the day when her   brother passed away two years  ago,  right in this day, in the freezing december. But, with Mir presence, everything was easier for her. And since that day, she made a promise for not lossing Mir no matter what.

~Mir House

“Umma....I am home...” Mir  took his shoes down as he saw her mother held a belt and swang it to him.

“Naughty boy.....you want to play all day? Naughty boy....Why don’t you just die? Hah?” Mir just stand freeze, felt his body hit again by that belt, but he should be patient, his mother got that mental sickness, it was not her fault. He bear it for many years, the pain, the wounds without anyone knew, even Nana and his own father.  It was because that bastard who rapped his mother and make her like this. Thanks to God, that bastard finally died in snow storm two years ago.

He made a shield with his hands, but that belt kept hit him. It  happened for  15 minutes, and after  her mother left, he confined on the floor. And like usually what he did, he took care of his own self, salve the wounds all over his body. He wasn’t crying, he wasn’t angry, but remembering his past happy day, silly....he just tried to runaway from reality.

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^-^ so, how are their chilhood memory.....

Thanks to you guys who read this story....

Really hope you'll like it 'till the end..... <3

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_Taemi_
#1
Chapter 4: you should have continue the story....
SailorVenusYaten
#2
lol about the chapter's pic, i think you will be happy to find out its a manga, in chinese, a very sad romantic story and just this year a drama adaption was created called Summer's Desire, i'm sure you will enjoy it very much. and cry from it, btw i love the story
KimSera
#3
@XxLizalooxX : Really??? thank you for sharing what you though....<br />
I hope you still enjoying read the next chapter.. ^-^
XxLizalooxX
#4
I really enjoyed this can't wait for the next update! ^^
KimSera
#5
@abubbuxd: yes, I am sorry...I am really bussy with school stuff. To be honest, I even haven't edit your pic yet... T.T <br />
I am sorry...very sorry.. I hope you can bear with me...<br />
Nana's pov? let's see.... I want Nana's pov too..... kya....kya...*crazy in my own mind*<br />
And I will always say thank you....so much..much...and ....much for being my loyal reader...<br />
you really ligt up my day... \\^-^//<br />
Love you... <3 <3 <3
sweetmango
#6
finally update!! ommo.. u update just with 1 chapter??? i want moooore!<br />
as you wis i'll keep wait for u'r next supdate!<br />
and i can't wait till the story reach the part of nana pov in the foreword!
KimSera
#7
kya.....ur profile picture is very mesmerized me......u edit it? <br />
And bout the update...<br />
I'm sorry....I'll update it if I have more free time.....<br />
school is really busy lately...<br />
please bear with me.... :)
sweetmango
#8
it's ok! like what i said mir-nana-joon pairing is the best! and i'll keep reading this. and you can use my profile picture too. hhahaha..<br />
update please... :))
KimSera
#9
@abubbuxd : Yes, I am agree with you, but so sorry, really sorry.....<br />
because the poll result, I must change the pairing.....<br />
Mianhae...Jeongmal mianhe.... *bow 90 degree* T.T
sweetmango
#10
aarggh! i can't wait for the next update! please update soon!<br />
even it's kinda sad at first. but i hope it won't be sad at the ending.<br />
btw,u'r right! nana-mir-joon is the best pairing! but cause u'r story i think nana-seulong will be great too. anda nana-taeyang have a west couple taste. hha. :)