Fated to Be With You -- SujuElfSS501Fan4Life
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Story Link: Fated to Be With You
Author: SujuElfSS501Fan4Life
Title: (4/5) – It was a good title, but I've seen this title somewhere over the blue moon.
Foreword & Description: (10/10) – It grabbed my attention very much. Even though I'm not a huge fan of teacher-student fanfics. It was very good and detailed. I loved it.
Poster, Background, Trailer, Appearance: (5/5) – You have both the required poster and background. Also, it is not distracting or anything.
Chapter titles: (5/5) – They were good chapter titles. It showed tiny information of the chapter. It's very good.
Spelling & Grammar: (30/35) – When I was reading this fanfic, I noticed that you switched the P.O.Vs (Point of Views) constantly. I was confused by who was thinking it. Was it Donghae or Yoona? Was it Kyuhyun, or… what? It took me a while to figure it out… But other then that, I though it was very good.
Plot: (9/10) – It's easy to follow, except for the fact that the P.O.Vs keep changing.
Originality: (10/10) – I've honestly never read something like this before. Probably because I've never read, nor liked, teacherXstudent fanfics… But yours was really good. I've never seen/read the female lead, which is Yoona, be so angry with her parents, that she decides to never see them again. I've never seen/read that the female lead's parents would cross her out of their lives forever. There is so much more, and this was just an amazing plot. 10 out of 10! ^-^
Character Development: (10/10) – Great character development. I could feel how angry Yoona was, or how annoyed she was. I could feel when Donghae was frustrated with her. Gosh, I absolutely loved it!
Flow: (10/10) – Just right! -ThumbsUp- I liked how the flow was going. It went from this, to that perfectly.
Total Before Bonuses: (93/100)
BONUS!!! – Things that are just the reviewer's personal preference. –
Writing Style: (3/5) – It was nice, but also confusing. -HintingAtChangeOfPOVs-
Enjoyment: (5/5) – I enjoyed it soooooo much :D
Anticipation: (5/5) – It made me want to read on and on. It disappointed me, when chapter 5 ended. I also subscribed!
Total After Bonuses: (106/115)
Reviewed by: WoAiDaesng
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