Chapter 1: holy shiit how do u do it? how do u paint a picture so clear and unmistakeably real?! I can see it all just from reading it...gosh so beautifully written *sobs*

Chapter 1: omg this is short but I don't know, I can just picture them perfectly in that kind of scene
Hyukjae being a soldier and meeting Donghae's who a bright child.. I can just imagine them perfectly ><
This is so awesome!

Its crazy, as I was reading this I had like a movie in my head. It was really pretty

This was. . . Oh my gosh. I saw it all in my head and I need to make a short film of this!!! I MUST!!!! CtvuyiwebkvAFBWA.

Yes. That is what must be done to make everything right in the world. (JK) But yeah, I totally saw this and it totally reminded me of me and the idea I had in my head that came from a dream and several other stuff. . . This made me feel hollow when Donghae didn't come back and I nearly cried! It was all just so. IDK. This automatically put me into their world for some reason. For some fics, it takes time for me to see it and feel it and sometimes I have to re-read but this was just one-go andI got everything. I nearly died of a heart attack and I scared my siblings. They thought I got hurt or something. LOl. OTL. Now they won't stop staring at me.
I love this. And your fics. I really like your writing and hope you continue to write. :3

WAIT IT WAS THIS ONE. I need to read this. D< /bookmarked

Woooooow, so nice... I like the way it was written :) Literally excellent, good job!

I like it^^