Aw wow. I actually really liked that. Sad story but full of lesson. To those who are confused, this is my interpretation. They met at the beginning of summer. But once summer had to end, char had to leVe the place. Seungri was literally her summer (coz she spent so much time with him that her summer only had memories of him) and her rain (because he was the reason she was crying). <3

I'm kinda confused but I still liked it:)
It's not bad but are you writing on your phone?
If you are not it will be better to separate it to avoid confusion on whose talking.
Can you explain the rain part. I think if you expanded this to a short 6 chapter story or so it can be more amazing:)