summer rain

summer rain

it was now my time to close my eyes.

"why did you lie about your name?" i asked back. "you told me your name was rain."

he smiled. i smiled back. he then sat up and held my hand like it was the most natural thing in the world.

"why do you have to go?" i can't say a word. it was the question i have been dreading ever since i got here on a peculiar gray sky april.. and now for some reason it's a gloomy day for May. i stood up not answering his question. the sun was greeting us mightily signaling it was already time to leave. i faced him.

"thank you...for this summer." i held back the tears.

"thank you for your umbrella on that rainy summer day. i met you because of that. thank you for taking me to places i have never been into..but both of us know, i have to leave." and just like that tears rushed through my eyes. i sudddenly felt his arms around me. we stood like that for a long time. he then whispered to me the words i would never forget.

"sorry. sorry for being your umbrella and your rain." he let go and walked away from me. just like that.my summer's over. my world stopped. i took a deep breath and started walking the opposite direction.

"i hope i'll see you again next summer,rain."

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Fadedmoonlight
#1
Aw wow. I actually really liked that. Sad story but full of lesson. To those who are confused, this is my interpretation. They met at the beginning of summer. But once summer had to end, char had to leVe the place. Seungri was literally her summer (coz she spent so much time with him that her summer only had memories of him) and her rain (because he was the reason she was crying). <3
ohayou87 #2
I'm kinda confused but I still liked it:)
It's not bad but are you writing on your phone?
If you are not it will be better to separate it to avoid confusion on whose talking.
Can you explain the rain part. I think if you expanded this to a short 6 chapter story or so it can be more amazing:)