Another Little Scribble

Description

Joon could never understand Mir's obsession with writing everything down - nor could he understand the metaphoric phrases which lingered on his white washed walls and brand new car. Mir was a genius, they said. He was a phenomenon; he was amazing. But Mir wasn't that to Joon. Mir was a lost boy with a false sense of life. Mir was a scribble which would soon be forgotten. Mir was lost, just like all the little scribbles he wrote across the page.

Foreword

‘The actual ery.’

That was the first and last thing Mir would ever hear.

(A/N: OHMIGOSH WHAT IS THIS. This is kind of spur-of-the-moment writing which should make sense. Just don't mind all of the weird quirks, habits and qualities I give Joon and Mir. In this story, Mir will be left handed. Yes, what the actual ery.)

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winterbling #1
This is an incredible story! It's so bitter but so beautiful that...I just don't know what to say. I love how it's so whimsical, but also impactful and I was stunned when Mir died. But it somehow fit into the story and you couldn't have ended it better. Amazing job!
Milielitre #2
Chapter 1: Your story is one of those which makes you feel THAT bittersweet feeling (I still haven't find a word to name it, but when I do, I'll consider that my life has been a big success. Until then, I'll just keep lurking on the web to look for it...)
Do I sound completely creepy ? (because that's not the intention, I'm on a quest for happiness too !)
chartreuse #3
Chapter 1: I just love reading each of your stories really, because all of them are much much different than one another. Your writing is very flexible and I like that, as well as your stories. I adore your writing style and your creative juices!
I enjoyed this, really.
Though when I reached the end of the page, I admit I did mutter, "What the actual ____ery did I read"
But not in a bad way, of course!
I enjoyed this, really.
:)
KaishkaKo #4
Chapter 1: This was so strange and so brilliant at the same time. I've been searching and searching for a decent JooMi fic with good grammar and actual paragraphs to read for sometime now. I love how you took Joon and Mir out of the world of MBLAQ but you didn't take them out of character. Mir is a very mysterious person (albeit a tad happier than portrayed here lol) and Joon does always come off some what reserved. It broke my heart that Mir killed himself in the end but it fit with the flow of the story. To keep him alive and have a happy ending wouldn't make much sense. I absolutely enjoyed your work! I'll be checking your profile to see what else you've written! If you have no other JooMi fics you should definitely write more of them, you seem to understand their characters so well!!
EndorseAllLove #5
I've actually been rendered speechless by your mastery of the written word (ok so maybe not entirely speechless...)

So beautiful, so haunting and completely addicting.

Reading this was like watching a falling star, awe-inspiring and sad at the same time.

*melts*
-foreverwithyou #6
Beauty and sorrow in a nutshell ; ____ ; <333
Good job for a spur-of-the-moment oneshot~
RukiKazama #7
I cried. <3
sungyo #8
This is actually the most beautiful thing I've ever read. I've loved MBLAQ from the beginning and always wanted people to write Joomir, but it was rare I ever found any. I just decided to look it up and I found this and dear Shishus it is amazing. I wish it was longer. I wish it was a book. I want to read it all the time. Let me keep you? <3
Waterloosunset #9
You have a talent for writing. I swear to god you do. This is just so beautiful, the way you portrayed them all. God Joon and Mir, I just don't even know what to say about them, yes it's sad that all Mir wanted was love and happiness which ultimately was his down fall. Okay I was going somewhere with that but it just left my mind right now. Forget about that. hahaha >.< Point being you did a beyond amazing job with this story.
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