I'm sorry, let's just be friend?

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oolala oolala oolala oolala~

Hello guys? Whats up, hehe 

I'm sorry for not continued my latest story, I'm so sorry~

Now I'm back with a new FF that my friend wrote for me,

her name is Karina~ 

so this is will be a JunSeob fanfic, because I just love them too freaking much :p

hope you enjoy it~

and don't forget, SUBSCRIBE AND COMMENT

Foreword

"Jo-Joahe, Yoseob-ah.."

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I_Luvz_Pie
#1
Chapter 1: Wahhh soo cute even if they aren't together they r still friends that makes me happy thanks for the fic^^
adelkodel96
#2
@Iloveys99 aigo kamsadeulibnida hehe sorry for not writing the meaning too hehe keep supporting me and I'll write another story as soon as i can. Gomawoyo~
ILOVEYS99
#3
I'm happy you use korean unnie...its very rare to find fanfics that have korean phases...
I love the ending...hihi Seobie's starting to like Jun :)
adelkodel96
#4
Codename000: thankyou so much for commenting and make a short review about this ff, I'm sorry for a lot mistakes that I didn't fix it, and sorry for the korean too because I thought that you guys know what the meaning, I'm so sorry, I'll do my best for my next ff, oncr again thankyou ^^
Creamseobie: oh well thanks for read and comment IKR my friend and I want to make something different and I hope it works, thankyou ^^
Creamseobie
#5
I think they will be together in the end. But it did not. Well at least they are closer to each other, even though I want them together n_n Nice fanfic :))
codename000
#6
Well, this was.. different.

I thought they'd end up together! :) But it's nice that you gave a realistic feeling to it, like just because Junhyung's gay doesn't mean Yoseob has to be too. :) Although, the information of Junhyung's past seems irrelevant, other than that, the result or the ending was nice. There is still hope for Junseob.

I really liked the Bus Scene. Though the korean phrases are somehow hard to understand. If ever you'll do that in the future, please give some footnote. :)

Well, I see some common errors like S-VA and it's hard to determine who's speaking and who's not. Some scenes are plausible but doesn't explain why the character did it, like junhyung asking for yoseob to kiss him all of a sudden for him to believe him. The condition doesn't make any sense, although it is explained on the latter but still. Also the characters that were speaking before. It would be nice if you gave them names.

Anyway, thank you. :)