Chapter 1: How sweet.
Love the way Taemin HAS to be first.
Well written.

Chapter 1: awwwwww omg so fluffy and sweet, romantic. I love it!
Jinki blushing is the cutest thing ever. I giggled at how Tae had to be 1st keke. XD

*hugs* this was so so so awesomely cute!

Chapter 1: Awww
So damn romantic then Tae interrupts XD

Chapter 1: forever the jinki-controller, his name is lee taemin!

keke, poor Jinki, that started off so romantic, then Taemin interrupts him, and does it first keke, so cute, fantastic job, OnTae are just so damn adorable; love the Taemin gif.

I find it hilarious how everything was so romantic, then Taemin stopped Jinki so he could propose first XD

:''')
I dunno, I don't think I need to say anything, 'cuz Taemin's gif said everything.
Haha xD
I love it! It's so nice and fluffy~ I love fluffy Ontae fics 8D
Onew is so adorableee gosh I can't even! And the part when Onew was proposing and Taemin went all panicky was really funny xD
Great story!
Keep making more!

Stumbled over this- short but very lovely, just a nice sincere piece! well done :)

kyaaaa that was so cute :D

/ dies from all the fluff /
ONTAE :')