Kris

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Yeah, something to release exam stress and spazz over the yness that is Kris..
this may be similar to a Tao fic that I've done but Oh well ^^
Hope You Enjoy It~!

 

 

Foreword

He came home and said nothing. I asked what was wrong but it was like talking to a brick wall. I was trying to help but all he did was ignore me so I gave up...

That was the stupidest thing I could ever have done..

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rosesyeah #1
Chapter 1: huhuhu poor chan hee ;-;
sofina11 #2
Chapter 1: ...that was great but...I wonder why Kris was so 'pissed'...:/
MrsInfinitelySimple #3
aaaw so cute ;;____;;
asami--chan #4
*cries* oh I loved this oneshot. I seriously teared up for this one. so sweet~~~

OH PLEASE DON'T STOP maKING THESE TYPES OF STORIES!! Yes, they are sad, but they always do end happy. And to be honest, this one and your Tao ones (which are similar to this) are some of my Favorite oneshots. <3 they are really touching~ I love them~ <3 <3 <3 maybe just add a little extra at the end when they talk it out a bit and everything is all happy again? or something. (^-^)v
but yes, this was a lovely story. thank you~
givinkrishead #5
Ah it's awesome!
But i expect that kris would reveal what made he stressed backthen 3 days haha

I love u author-nim
Mybe sequel or another kris fanfict ^o^
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myunghee17ukiss #6
i really really love it!:)
Cherishes #7
Love it love it love it!!
philphil #8
Love it ><
BlackJupiter23 #9
thank you all ^^
yeah i'll try to be a bit more uopbeat cuz I have been noticing how depressing I can be with my stories ^^ I tried to stay as on topic as I could because I tend to stray from the plot often in my stories so I guess that might be why it was rushed.
i will also try to tie up loose plot ends to make the story complete ^^
again thank you all..my teacher actually told my english class this all but I think I was too busy daydreaming to really put into action what she said ^^
jessicaliana #10
I like this story, it's good. :) one piece of advice would be not to rush it too much and also not to write about abuse and depression too much in your fanfics. It can affect your mood, although it feels more dramatic and emotional. Add a bit more to the story besides how the girl is left lonely and hurt due to his actions and the story suddenly turning better. Same with Tao's story. Other than that, I like your writing style. Give a bit more time to think about the plot development, and you're good to go!
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