wow... i loved it, it was perfect. *-*

Eeeeep! Sweet! Heartbreaking! Amazing! Splendid! Short! I loved it <3 woot woot you are amazing! ^_^' mianhe if I freaked you out with my comment ^_^' but great story

Awwwww really really very cute

aawwwwwwwww!!!
Beautiful! Jongyu is so cute~ ♥

Totally loved how you wrote the story and would love to read more from you^^

It's so sad at first, but soooooooooo BEAUTIFUL at the end TT^TT
thanks for the story ^^
Waiting for another JongYu <3

BEAUTIFUL!!
Keep writing Jongyu, pls! =D

So cute! I hope Onew-oppa never feels this way because he's perfect and we love him.

Omo, this is so beautiful >O<
Onew, you're perfect with the way you are, you're beautiful bb, no need to be insecure T.T
Jonghyun, take care your hubby, please, he needs your love >.<
I'm happy they didn't break up^^
Great story :D