Chapter 1: I'm not really into ontae unless bro ontae or something like this where Taemin crushes on onew. This was perfect and sweet!

Chapter 4: This willnalways be one of my favourites. I've read it several times and each time I understand it a little bit more . it seems like Minho wasn't a genuine friend in the beginning. Jinki offered to tutor him buhe refused in order to avoid spending time with Jinki. Then hahah i believe Minho told his mom he wanted a tutor and he himself might have suggested taemin.

Chapter 4: Awwww!
This is amazing!
I love how the friendship between Minho & Onew isn't that deep, nor as close as I thought.

This story is really amazing! Everything is sort of subtly said.

You are an amazing writer; so good with details. You should definitely write a sequel to this! :)

I also think I like this more than the Kyunew, even though I still love that one :)

Eeee Megan this was sooo good! I really liked Taemin's character and how Onew is grounded and Taemin is all up in the sky. Don't care much for Minho's character in this. Wish he seemed to care more about Jinki, but then I guess I kinda understand their relationship. It's sort of like what happened with my and Gabby and how we just kinda drifted apart. You think you're really close friends with someone and then the longer you're friends with them the less you seem to really know each other.

God, I'm terrible when it comes to replying to comments, but thank you all for doing so! I really do appreciate it, but I don't really get how to reply here so this is just a general thanks. Comments keep the writing going haha.

This was a very great story!! I enjoy ontae a lot!!

This was soooooo well written. I absolutely love your writing style! It was a fanatically cute story and there should be more like it... I wish it was longer, only because i want to enjoy reading for longer... It was perfect.

It's really a good story :)
Go go go Fredrick!