You know this making a better fict if this is long enough, this is too short for me to describe how Onew feel and I'm really happy cause yeah I'm expecting OnHo not OnKey lol ._. Thanks for sharing

No sequel ? Why are you doing this to me. Such work doesn't need to end right there.

It feels kind of unfinished but in a good and realistic way. It was very good.

I.LOVE.THE.LAST.SIX.LINES.OMG.ONHO

Poor onew... He love key but to afraid just to speak to him... But he lucky have a friend like minho.. Nice story author... ^^

I just want to ask you to make OnHo!sequel, but you say no >.<
Poor Onew T_T
Then let me imagine Minho & Onew love each at the end :D
The ending okay to me, because I got the heartbreaking & regret feeling from Onew^^

So it was OnHo at then end? O.O

omo my poor Onew D:

I don't think the ending is crappy. I think it's really good because I expected to be Onew with Minho at the end (even if I didn't like the idea) but you suprised me.
Too bad it's a little to short and emotions aren't described in detail, but in general it was really good... :)

Ooooh~ I'm sorry for Onew., but as a Jongkey fan, I cant help but being biased. =p