Teaser One

Camp Diamond: For Troubled Teens

Teaser One

For the first time in nearly six months, the Great Hall was filled with chatter and laughter. For the past hour, the workers of Camp Diamond, both old and new, had been filing into the spacious building. The chairs had been pushed into the center of the room facing the stage. On the stage stood Park Jungsoo, or better known as Leeteuk, as he smiled watching his fellow workers getting along so well. The previous years had proven to be stressful as anger and resentment caused tension amongst the workers, to the point where fights and arguments would break out on a nearly daily basis. Leeteuk only hoped that this year would be different, wanting his first year as Camp Director to go as smoothly as possible.

Finally, 12:00 p.m. had arrived, and the meeting was to commence. Leeteuk stood from his seat coughing to gain the crowd’s attention as the chatter slowly stopped. Once it did he smiled, his trademark dimple appearing. This was it, his first time addressing the staff as it’s leader had come. Leeteuk would be lying if he said he wasn’t nervous, but was filled with nothing but happiness for his new responsibilities. Though young, Leeteuk was confident in his abilities. He coughed lightly once more before speaking.

“Welcome everyone! I’m so happy to be here with you all once again. First, I would like to thank everyone I have worked with these past few years. Working amongst you all as a fellow counselor has been an amazing experience, one that I will never forget. I know that everyone is hurting after it was announced a few months ago that Yang Hyunsuk-ssi had stepped down from his position as Director of Camp Diamond.” A few murmurs of agreement were heard from the crowd as Leeteuk paused for a moment, taking a moment to grieve himself before continuing. “However, I hope that I may gain the help and support from all of you that was given to Yang Hyunsuk-ssi in the past. Though they are big shoes to fill, I know that with everyone’s help I will be able to make Yang Hyunsuk-ssi proud as the new Director of Camp Diamond.”

Cheers immediately rose up from the crowd. Leeteuk had always been a well-liked counselor, by both the other workers and the campers. The staff knew that no one else could have been able to replace Yang Hyunsuk, nor would they have wanted anyone else, other than Leeteuk. The smile on his face had only grown bigger with the response he had been given.

Leeteuk made to speak, gesturing the crowd into silence once again. “Now, let’s get on to business. Camp Diamond is opening its gates once more in just one week and there is plenty of work to be done.” Groans filled the room. This was the least fun part of working at the camp, in the opinion of most. “All the buildings need to be cleaned, the grass needs to be cut, and all appliances must be in working order. If they are not, they will need to be fixed or have new ones ordered. The pavement on the basketball court needs to be replaced, and I’m sure you’ve all seen the sorry state the right-most dock on the lake is in.” Snickers quickly replaced the groans. During the final days of camp last year, a group of campers had smashed their paddleboats into the dock as they were trying to play boat-Marco Polo. As no one was hurt, the scene was hilarious to those who had witnessed it and had become a funny story to tell.

Grinning slightly, Leeteuk merely continued on. “Let’s all start this year with smiles on our faces and happiness in our hearts, and hopefully finish it like that as well. We need to make this year at Camp Diamond one that no one will forget. Now, let’s get to work, we only have one week left!” Leeteuk finished off his speech with a clap of his hands, proceeding to give everyone specific orders on what to do.

The chatter that now filled the Great Hall was louder than before as the workers were filled with motivation. Not even the grouchy counselors or someone’s enemy could bring anyone’s mood down. Everyone wanted to make this year better than the last. Leeteuk and the rest of the staff could only hope that this year’s campers would want the same.

 


____kasper's korner

Leeteuk's got lots of responsibilities! Think he can handle it? Hehehehe.

I'm probably going to post a few more teasers. However, they'll all be in the point of view of the workers.

So basically, y'all will get a look on some of the people that work at the camp, what they do, and a bit of their personalities. The history of the camp and how it works will be slightly revealed, as well.

Kathy

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July 3: So, did anyone catch the Shakespeare quote in Chapter Five? Treasure Hunt!

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sailorbellewrites
#1
Oh wow, I totally did not comment. I'm so sorry, I just realized that.
Anyways, the scavenger hunt idea was cool! I really liked reading how all the girls worked together, despite them all being so different.
I feel bad for not having much to say about it (Other than how much I loved it and how the scene when they were talking about the animal with no legs was cute).
Keep up the good work.
Happy Writing.
a-positive #2
FRIENDSHIP! it's very lovely to see the girls get along! Their different personalities make a good dynamics between them!
i absolutely adore DemixJihae friendship! oh, all of them actually! LOL, Jihae if you don't want Demi stop dragging you roughly, you should stop procrastinating hahaha
also glad seeing Jinju and Hyemi got along so well so far! The scene when Hyemi turned Jinju's arm to the correct direction is sooooooo cute xD
LOL when Heebon patted Kimchi's head and Dee got angry :p sister complex eh?
" I don’t know why but one of the chef’s has a bunch of penguin stuffed animals on the wall-shelves in the kitchens" HAHAHAHA who was that chef?? that was so random lol
Heebon eavesdropped the boys' talk :p
I wonder who said this “Has any of the horses had an amputation?” (LOOOOL),
and this “It better not be a bug or I’ll scream.” hahahaha, he's afraid of bugs! xD

great update, Kasper!
have fun at the shore and with the school :p
Gingi_306
#3
You have no idea how happy I am to see the girls actually working together!! The moments between Demi an JiHae were absolutely hilarious!! Hahaha I loved it when Demi put JiHae in a head lock. Too funny. XD
And seeing JinJu and HyeMi finally let go of their social awkwardness just for that small moment made me smile like an idiot.

“Has any of the horses had an amputation?”
Best line in the entire chapter!! XD
@baby_dragon: No you are not the only one laughing like an idiot at this scene. Well, at least I'm laughing like an idiot; you might just be laughing a lot.
Anyways, that scene was absolutely hilarious XD I'm still laughing at it btw.

I would personally like to see a few chapters like this every now and then. You know where they're arguing with each other one day and acting like friends the other.
chanqster
#4
Also wanted to add that the scavenger hunt idea = amazingness. ♥
And that I pissed myself laughing when the boys were trying to figure out the riddle. Who on earth suggested a horse, haha? You should post that scene again, and tell us who said what, because that was just too funny to pass up!
Dee casually entered the comments box, "Is was probably Mir that said a horse. ."
Kidding, kidding.
But it would still be funny if you make an extra chapter, revealing who said that! Am I the only one laughing at that scene so darn much?
Yes?
Oh...
*hides in embarrassment*

Anyway, without further to do, you Kathy have made my day by updating!
Whenever I see an update, I smile like a babo. This was amazing, as usual~ ♥
chanqster
#5
Wow. This chapter was just so wonderful! Do you know how much I smiled seeing the girls work together?
I absolutely loved Heebon in this chapter. She was so hilarious! I loved the part where Kimchi called her Heebonie, lol. Daehyun's response to her. Brb, I'm dying from laughter!
Ah, Jinhee, too, very funny. She's quite the diva. I couldn't contain my laughter when she walked in and Sungjong asked if she was looking for the life jacket thingy.
Changjo and Kimchi waving to each other~ So cute!
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m6ltcnTfpc1rywrtoo1_500.gif
Basically, any Changjo and Kimchi scenes I read, I end up like that~ ^^
Hmmm, Dee, how is it you instantly spotted Mireu? Hmmm~ considering they were squinting to see them, Dee instantly spotted him. Haha, nice one, Dee!
Jinju is such a cutie! Her blankey, haha, Dee knows everything! But she's so sweet, and I love how she opened up a bit more. Still clinging to Hyemi a lot, but she's getting along with the others, too.
Demi, I love you. Seriously, her character had me on the floor dying from laughter. Her actions with Jihae. Gosh, I'm laughing so much! Haha, Himchan, "You know I love you, but this is ours."
Jihae stopping to talk with Yunho. Priceless. Stop slacking off, Jihae! Lol, when Demi grabbed her, she just began squirming. She's quite an interesting character, I mean, one second she's glaring at people, and the next she's completely different, like when she went to talk to Yunho!
Awwww, the Cas and Jongup scene~ He blushed, waah! "Fight, fight, fight!" Oh, you humorous girl. It's a good thing Cas used to live in America. Imagine if she didn't. No penny, more cleaning.
Hyemi is one of my favourites! She is really awesome, you know? Like, always managing to keep an expressionless face, knowing a lot (the book~), and more. She just gives off a cool and chill vibe. I love it!
--Angelmato--
#6
This chapter was incredible, it was soo cute.
Jinhee, Jihae and Dee are really entertaining they never get along and are always arguing.
I agree with @jojobelle's description of Heebon, i think that she is an attention seeker too and she is a little too conceited, its good to have high self esteem but not too high. i like the fact that her and Cas are like besties and get along very well.
Demi and HimChan....what can I say about those two. They are the greasiest couple in the whole camp. I totally understand why some people are confused by their relationship, One minute Demi is all over him the next she can't stand him, its almost like a roller coaster....and I love roller coasters ^.^
I don't really get Cas and Jongup's relationship, they are very flirty but nothing is really happening, but i really like it because they are just too cute
Dee is so cruel to Mir. Sometimes I feel bad for him because she is always picking on him.
Jihae and Dongwoo are really cute. I like how he wanted to help her with her fear of big animals.
Hyemi and Seugnho are just perfect, but the perfection was ruined by Thunder...*sigh* it was a really nice scene with between those too.
The purple team is very interesting, they are all really funny, I feel like there is going to be alot of drama down the line, Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
a-positive #7
@jojobelle19
"he's cute and adorable, how can anyone be so mean to that face."
i can't agree more!!

lol, sorry for blabbering :p
sailorbellewrites
#8
Part 2

Well I really don't think I have anyone left to talk about other than Jinju!
GAHH! She's soooo cute. I didn't even realize I made her that cute. But it's perfect. I love how she just drags Changmin to sewing class, not giving him an option (I also loves how he just es about it too). It was adorable. I also like how Jieun is setting her up with Hyemi. She'll have more friend!

Please keep up the good work.
And have fun writing!